Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity: use correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague or contradictory phrases (e.g., “I can't really feel the enchanting view”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or train. I find watching the passing landscape calming, and I especially enjoy sunsets because the changing colors make the journey feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Be concise and direct: respond to the question first, then give a clear reason with a specific example. Avoid filler phrases and repetition. Use linking words like 'however' or 'instead' to contrast your preference with what others do.

Ví dụ: Not really; instead of taking photos, I prefer to store memories in my mind because I feel more present that way. For example, when I visited the coast last year I watched the waves and remembered the colors rather than photographing them.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and slightly more specific supporting details: explain why your preference changed and give a brief example. Use linking words like 'however' and 'because' to show contrast and reasons.

Ví dụ: I like both, but at different times. When I was a teenager I preferred mountains because I enjoyed hiking and quiet forests; however, now I prefer the sea because I love swimming and relaxing on the beach during holiday trips.

× Yes, definitely, I always looking out through the window when I traveling by a bus or train because I really enjoy the feeling that the sun flies away in front of me.

✓ Yes, definitely, I am always looking out through the window when I travel by bus or train because I really enjoy the feeling that the sun moves away in front of me.

The original sentence omits the auxiliary verb for the present continuous: 'I always looking' should be 'I am always looking' (Grammar problem type 8). Also 'I traveling' lacks the auxiliary 'am' and should be 'I travel' for a habitual action (present simple) or 'I am travelling' for a current action; here present simple 'I travel' fits the habitual context (Grammar problem type 6). 'The sun flies away' is unnatural; use 'moves away' to describe apparent motion of the sun. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs for progressive forms and use present simple for habitual actions; choose verbs that collocate naturally (e.g., 'the sun moves away').

× It makes me feel very relaxed and umm, I can't really feel the enchanting view.

✓ It makes me feel very relaxed and, umm, I can't help but enjoy the enchanting view.

'I can't really feel the enchanting view' is incorrect use of 'feel' and negative modal sense; the intended meaning is positive enjoyment. Use 'I can't help but enjoy' or 'I really enjoy' to express inability to resist enjoying the view (Grammar problem type 6). Also punctuation: include commas for pauses. Suggestion: replace awkward negative phrasing with a positive idiom that matches the intent.

× I'm not really, I think, you know, my most of people, I think many tourists, they would prefer to take a lot of photos when they come to a new places and visiting some amazing land, uh, landscape landmarks.

✓ Not really. I think most people, especially many tourists, prefer to take a lot of photos when they come to new places and visit amazing landscapes.

Multiple problems: 'my most of people' is incorrect pronoun and determiner use; use 'most people' (Grammar problem type 12 and 14). 'They would prefer' is stylistically fine but unnecessary 'they'; subject already 'people' so use simple present 'prefer' for general habits (Grammar problem type 6). 'a new places' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'new places' (Grammar problem type 22). 'visiting some amazing land, uh, landscape landmarks' is redundant and uses incorrect noun forms; use 'visit amazing landscapes.' Suggestion: simplify sentence to correct pronouns/determiners, use present simple for habitual truths, and avoid redundant nouns.

× But for my part, I think I just prefer to keep those beautiful visual pictures in my mind.

✓ But for my part, I prefer to keep those beautiful images in my mind.

'I think I just prefer' contains extra filler 'I think' and redundant 'just' which are not grammatical errors but affect fluency; primary issue is tense and word choice. 'visual pictures' is redundant—use 'images' (Grammar problem type 6 and 13). Suggestion: use concise present simple for preferences and choose natural collocations like 'keep images in my mind.'

× Oh, that's an interesting question because I think I am a fan of both of them, but it depends on different stages.

✓ Oh, that's an interesting question because I am a fan of both, but it depends on different stages of my life.

'Both of them' is wordy; 'both' suffices. 'It depends on different stages' is incomplete—needs 'of my life' to specify what stages are meant (Grammar problem type 26). Suggestion: complete the noun phrase and streamline wording.

× To begin with. In the early years of my teenagers I think I prefer mountains, but now I am really keen on the seas.

✓ To begin with, in my early teens I preferred the mountains, but now I am really keen on the sea.

Fragment 'To begin with.' should join the next clause with a comma for correct sentence flow (Grammar problem type 26). 'In the early years of my teenagers' is incorrect phrasing; use 'in my early teens.' Preference in the past requires past tense 'preferred' (Grammar problem type 5). 'the seas' is less natural than 'the sea' when speaking generally (Grammar problem type 13/22). Suggestion: use correct past tense for past preferences, correct age phrase 'early teens,' and join fragments into one sentence.