Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize the answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., 'prefer car to bus', 'sit', 'prevents'). Avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer travelling by car rather than by bus, and I like to sit by the window. For example, I sit by the window to enjoy the greenery outside, which makes the journey pleasant, and it also helps prevent motion sickness.

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and reduce hesitations. Use correct verb forms and more concise phrasing. Provide a brief specific example and use a linking phrase to show purpose (e.g., 'so that'). Avoid repetition like 'which can be'.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I sit by the window I usually take photos of the scenery so I can keep memories. For instance, I often photograph coastal views and look back at them later to remember that trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with correct vocabulary. Avoid repetition and informal phrases like 'my whole soul'. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example') and keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy the sound of the waves and the fresh sea breeze. For example, visiting the seashore relaxes me and I like swimming and walking along the beach.

× Well, I generally don't prefer to travel by bus, but I prefer car moreover than bus.

✓ Well, I generally don't prefer to travel by bus, but I prefer the car to the bus.

Error types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 22 (Article errors), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions). 'prefer car moreover than bus' is ungrammatical: 'car' needs the definite article 'the' and the comparison should use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than'. 'moreover' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'prefer the car to the bus.'

× Whenever I travel through the car, I sits near the window.

✓ Whenever I travel by car, I sit near the window.

Error types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 27 (Subject-verb agreement/ 2 Third person singular issue). Use 'travel by car' not 'through the car'. 'I sits' is incorrect: subject 'I' takes base verb 'sit'. Suggestion: use 'I sit' and 'travel by car.'

× The reason for that is that I can enjoy the greenery all over as well as it keeps me fresh throughout the journey and prevent me from motion sickness.

✓ The reason is that I can enjoy the greenery everywhere, and it keeps me fresh throughout the journey and prevents me from motion sickness.

Error types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 6 (Present tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement). 'all over' is better as 'everywhere' here. Coordination requires 'and it keeps... and prevents' with 'prevents' matching subject 'it'. Suggestion: use parallel verbs 'keeps' and 'prevents' and 'everywhere.'

× Well, whenever I sit next to the window, I definitely prefers to take photo outside because uh, I could keep them as a part of memory which can be which can be reviewed after when I get back to the home or after several years.

✓ Well, whenever I sit next to the window, I definitely prefer to take photos outside because I can keep them as memories to look at when I get back home or after several years.

Error types: 2 (Third person singular issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'I definitely prefers' should be 'I definitely prefer'. 'take photo' should be plural 'take photos'. 'could' is acceptable but 'can' fits present. 'part of memory' is unnatural; use 'memories' or 'a part of my memory'. 'get back to the home' should be 'get back home'. Suggestion: use correct verb form, plural noun, and preposition-free 'get back home.'

× Well I would prefer sea over mountain because whenever I travel to to the seashore I really like the waves coming towards me and enjoy enjoy into the sea and enjoy, enjoy into the sea and also the breeze that makes my whole soul feel very fresh.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea to the mountains because whenever I travel to the seashore I really like the waves coming toward me and enjoy going into the sea, and also the breeze that makes me feel very refreshed.

Error types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 22 (Article errors), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Use definite articles 'the sea' and plural 'the mountains' or 'the mountain' consistently. 'prefer sea over mountain' should be 'prefer the sea to the mountains' or 'prefer the sea over the mountains.' Remove duplicate words 'enjoy enjoy' and use 'going into the sea'. 'towards me' -> 'toward me' (either is OK). 'makes my whole soul feel very fresh' is awkward; 'makes me feel very refreshed' is natural. Suggestion: simplify and use correct articles, plural forms, and avoid repetition.