Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I like taking pictures of different while wives and I picture nature. I I am picture I am picture nature. Nature beautiful and I like nature.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like village because hmm village, uh, beautiful and good, uh, for example, beautiful, uh, a village, uh, air village, airport. Clean air I don't see.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I like the views of my own country because I was born and raised there.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: Javobingizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qiling. Boshlanishda mavzuni ayting (ha yoki yo‘q), so‘ng ikkita qo‘shimcha tafsilot bering: nima uchun va qanday turdagi manzaralarni yoqtirishingizni ayting. So‘zlarni takrorlamang va to‘g‘ri grammatik tuzilmalardan foydalaning. Masalan, “I like taking pictures of different views” deb boshlang va keyin sababni va bir misolni bering. Ingliz tilida oddiy va to‘g‘ri gaplarni ishlating.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture unique moments. For example, I often photograph forests and mountains because I like the colors and textures. I usually use my phone or a small camera when I travel.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq qilib boshlang: qishloqmi yoki shaharniyoqlaysizmi. So‘ng sababni ikki yoki uch jumla bilan tushuntiring va misol keltiring. Bekor ovozlar (hmm, uh) va takrorlarni kamaytiring. Sifat va sabablarni aniq ifoda eting (masalan, “clean air, peaceful environment”).
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because the countryside is peaceful and has clean air. For example, I enjoy walking in villages where there are fields and fewer cars. The scenery makes me feel relaxed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Javobni kengaytiring: qisqa mavzu jumlasidan keyin sababni va bir yoki ikki konkret sabab yoki taqqoslash keltiring. Bu yordam beradi javobingiz mazmunli va xolis ko‘rinadi. Mahalliy manzaralarning xususiyatlarini (madaniyat, tarix, tabiiy go‘zallik) ayting va nima uchun ular sizga maxsus ekanini tushuntiring.
Ví dụ: I prefer the views of my own country because I was born and raised there and feel a strong connection. For instance, the traditional architecture and familiar landscapes remind me of family trips. Although foreign views can be interesting, local scenes feel more meaningful to me.
× I like taking pictures of different while wives and I picture nature. I I am picture I am picture nature. Nature beautiful and I like nature.
✓ I like taking pictures of different views, and I often photograph nature. Nature is beautiful and I like it.
The original contains fragmented and repeated phrases, wrong word choice ('wives' instead of 'views'), missing verbs, and missing linking words. This is a sentence structure error: combine ideas into complete sentences, use the correct noun 'views', add appropriate verbs ('photograph', 'is') and pronouns ('it') to make the meaning clear. Suggestion: plan each sentence with a subject and a verb, avoid repetition, and choose the correct vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID: 26
× I like village because hmm village, uh, beautiful and good, uh, for example, beautiful, uh, a village, uh, air village, airport. Clean air I don't see.
✓ I like villages because they are beautiful and have clean air.
The original misuses adjectives and produces disfluent, repetitive phrasing and incorrect noun forms ('village' should be plural 'villages' when speaking generally). It also contains unclear fragments ('air village, airport'). This falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure. Use the plural for general statements, add a subject for the second clause ('they'), and place adjectives before nouns. Suggestion: simplify to one clear sentence: 'I like villages because they are beautiful and have clean air.' Grammar problem type ID:13
× Clean air I don't see.
✓ I can breathe clean air there.
The original word order is incorrect and tense/aspect is wrong for the intended meaning. Saying 'I don't see clean air' is unnatural; likely intended that clean air is present and they can experience it. Use present simple or modal construction to express ability/experience. Suggestion: use 'I can breathe clean air there' or 'There is clean air.' Grammar problem type ID:6
× I like the views of my own country because I was born and raised there.
✓ I like the views of my own country because I was born and raised there.
This sentence is grammatically correct: past tense verbs 'was born' and 'raised' correctly describe past events, and present simple 'I like' expresses current preference. No correction needed. Explanation provided: the use of past tense for background information and present tense for current preference is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:5