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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like taking pictures. I think pictures can record my beauty.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in urban areas. I think the city in urban areas are adventure.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in my own country because I love my countries. I think it have many. Advantages then other countries?

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 注意语法与表达的自然性。回答应直接回应问题并展开一到两句具体细节。‘record my beauty’ 表达不够准确且可能引起歧义,应说记录回忆、风景或当下的感受。可使用连接词丰富连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually photograph landscapes and cityscapes because they help me remember a place and how I felt there.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多且表达不自然。句子应简洁并提供具体原因或例子。注意主谓一致(cities are / the city is),以及词汇搭配(adventurous 或 vibrant)。建议加一两句说明你喜欢城市景观的具体方面。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the lively atmosphere and diverse architecture. For example, I enjoy photographing busy streets, modern buildings and colorful markets.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 表达不清且存在多处语法错误。应直接回答并给出具体理由或比较,避免含糊的句子。注意单复数(country/countries)、时态与连贯性。用一到两句说明本国景观的特点并举例。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong emotional connection to its landscapes and culture. For instance, the traditional villages and coastal scenery remind me of my childhood and are unique compared to places I've visited abroad.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think pictures can record my beauty.

I think pictures can capture my beauty.

原句中使用動詞“record”語意不夠自然,通常說“capture”或“record”可記錄影像,但說“capture my beauty”更符合英語母語者表達。建議用“capture”來表示以照片表現或捕捉美感。注意這裡並非語法錯誤而是用詞不當,屬於形容詞/副詞或詞彙使用問題(13)。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think the city in urban areas are adventure.

I think cities in urban areas are adventurous.

原句主語與動詞不一致且詞類使用錯誤:原句“the city in urban areas”在泛指多個城市時應用複數“cities”,因此動詞也用“are”。此外“adventure”是名詞,形容詞應為“adventurous”。綜合改為“cities... are adventurous”。中文建議:注意主語單複數一致和名詞/形容詞的區別,將“city”改為複數“cities”,將“adventure”改為形容詞“adventurous”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer views in my own country because I love my countries.

I prefer views in my own country because I love my country.

原句使用了矛盾的代詞/名詞形式:前半句用單數“my own country”,後半句卻用複數“my countries”,應保持一致。將後句改為單數“my country”。中文建議:保持代詞或名詞單複數一致,若只指一個國家用單數。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think it have many. Advantages then other countries?

I think it has many advantages compared to other countries.

原句語序、標點和動詞形式都有問題。首先“it”指代單數,動詞應為“has”而非“have”。句中“many. Advantages then other countries?” 不合語法;應連成一個完整句子並使用介詞短語“compared to”或“than”來比較。建議改為“I think it has many advantages compared to other countries.” 中文解釋:注意主語與動詞在數的一致(it + has),並用正確比較結構“compared to/than”。

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