Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản: dùng thì phù hợp (I was -> I have been), động từ đúng (I am passionate about photographing). (2) Tổ chức câu rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. (3) Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., Also, Recently). (4) Giảm tiếng ums/ahs và dừng tạm. Ví dụ tập trả lời trong 2–3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng và không quá dài.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved taking photographs since I was young. I usually photograph mountains and everyday scenes, especially when the light is good. Also, I enjoy trying different angles to make the images more interesting.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp, súc tích (I prefer urban views.). (2) Giải thích rõ lý do bằng 1–2 lý do cụ thể, tránh mâu thuẫn (đừng nói bạn thích nhưng lại nêu toàn điểm tiêu cực). (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, however). (4) Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (traffic, bustling, lively, crowded) và tránh tiếng ậm ừ.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I like the vibrant atmosphere and architectural variety in cities. For example, busy streets and modern buildings often create interesting photo opportunities, though they can sometimes be noisy.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Trả lời rõ ràng: cho biết bạn thích trong nước hay nước ngoài, rồi giải thích lý do. (2) Tránh mâu thuẫn và hoàn thiện câu (I definitely want to explore other countries' scenery -> rõ ràng). (3) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: beaches, mountains, cultural sites) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục. (4) Kiểm soát ngắt quãng và hoàn thành ý trước khi chuyển câu.

Ví dụ: I appreciate the variety of landscapes in my country, but I would also like to see scenery abroad. For example, I want to visit coastal towns in Spain and the fjords in Norway to compare them with our mountains and beaches.

× Yes, of course I when I was when I was young, I passionate on taking photographs.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was young, I was passionate about taking photographs.

The original sentence has repetition and missing verbs and incorrect preposition. Use a full clause 'When I was young' and include the linking verb 'was' with adjective 'passionate'. Use preposition 'about' not 'on'. Also separate ideas with a period for clarity.

× Now I usually take photo umm like mountains, some uh, pictures and also in real life times some.

✓ Now I usually take photos of things like mountains and other real-life scenes.

Use the plural 'photos' (singular/plural issue) and the correct preposition 'of' after 'take photos'. 'Real-life times' is incorrect; use 'real-life scenes'. Avoid filler words and use natural noun phrases.

× For me, I prefer in urban areas because on, you know, I'm a teenager so I definitely prefer urban areas where whereas have noises, uh, traffic jam, but also makes me sometimes annoyed.

✓ For me, I prefer urban areas because, you know, as a teenager I definitely like places with noise and traffic jams, although they sometimes annoy me.

Remove incorrect preposition 'in' after 'prefer' (we say 'prefer urban areas' not 'prefer in urban areas'). 'Whereas have noises' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'places with noise and traffic jams'. Use plural 'traffic jams'. Use 'annoy me' rather than 'makes me annoyed' for natural phrasing.

× Honestly my country has a wide range of beautiful sceneries and landscapes so I definitely want to explore others sceneries but if I have a chance I will. I am I'm.

✓ Honestly, my country has a wide range of beautiful scenery and landscapes, so I definitely want to explore other countries' scenery, and if I have the chance I will.

Use uncountable 'scenery' instead of 'sceneries' and 'other' should modify 'countries' or 'places' not 'sceneries'. Use possessive 'countries' scenery' or rephrase 'other countries' scenery'. Remove the incomplete 'I am I'm.' and complete the conditional 'if I have the chance I will'.