Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples with brief descriptions. Avoid repetition (e.g. ‘morning scenes like sunset, sunshine’—sunset is evening). Use linking words to connect ideas and correct word choice (e.g. ‘flower beds’, ‘ocean waves’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photography, especially landscapes. For example, I often photograph ocean waves at sunrise for their dynamic light, and I take close-up shots of flower beds to capture color and texture.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with structured reasons. Avoid unclear phrases (“Maybe it enrollees or it is a 10 urban areas”). Use linking words (‘On the one hand’, ‘On the other hand’, ‘also’) and vary vocabulary to avoid repeating ‘beautiful’ many times. Be concise—two to three supporting points are enough.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. On the one hand, rural areas offer charming small houses and colorful gardens that feel peaceful. On the other hand, urban areas provide dramatic shots of high-rise buildings and lively downtown streets, so I enjoy photographing both.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and correct confusing phrases (e.g. ‘capture their famous parts in my country’). State a clear preference or explain why you like both, giving specific examples of places or landmarks. Use linking words (‘for example’, ‘also’) and be more precise about what you photograph abroad versus at home.

Ví dụ: I enjoy photographing scenes both at home and abroad because each offers something different. For example, in my country I focus on traditional architecture and local festivals, while abroad I like to photograph famous landmarks and unique street scenes to learn about other cultures.

× Yes, I like photography. I like to take pictures of different views like some morning scenes like sunset, sunshine and the other views like the waves of the oceans flower bed.

✓ Yes, I like photography. I like to take pictures of different views, such as morning scenes like sunrises and sunshine, and other views like ocean waves and flower beds.

Problems: plural and word choice errors and awkward structure (Grammar Problem Type IDs 1 and 26). 'Sunset' is inconsistent with 'morning scenes'; use 'sunrises'. 'the waves of the oceans flower bed' is ungrammatical and mixes nouns; separate into 'ocean waves' and 'flower beds'. Use commas and 'such as' for examples. Suggestion: group similar examples, use correct plural forms, and maintain parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID: 1 and 26

× I prefer both views. Maybe it enrollees or it is a 10 urban areas.

✓ I prefer both. Maybe I like urban areas, or maybe I prefer rural areas; I enjoy both equally.

Problems: sentence is ungrammatical and contains incorrect words 'enrollees' and 'a 10' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 26 and 6). The original fails to express contrast. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer both' and clarify by providing parallel alternatives. Ensure verbs and nouns are appropriate and sentences are complete. Grammar problem type ID: 26 and 6

× In rural areas we can capture the picture of beautiful houses, small houses, beautiful gardens, beautiful farms and moreover, in urban areas we can collect the shots of high rise buildings, downtown areas.

✓ In rural areas we can capture pictures of beautiful small houses, gardens, and farms; moreover, in urban areas we can take shots of high-rise buildings and downtown scenes.

Problems: article usage and pluralization (Grammar Problem Type IDs 22 and 1) and word form 'high rise' should be hyphenated as an adjective. 'capture the picture of' is awkward; use 'capture pictures of' or 'take shots of'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, hyphenate compound adjectives, and use parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID: 22 and 1

× I prefer both fields in my own country and in foreign countries.

✓ I like photographing scenes both in my own country and in foreign countries.

Problems: 'prefer both fields' is incorrect word choice and structure (Grammar Problem Type IDs 26 and 12). Use a clear verb phrase 'like photographing scenes' and parallel prepositional phrases 'in my own country and in foreign countries'. Suggestion: use precise nouns and keep parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID: 26 and 12

× Also, whenever I visit foreign countries, I like to capture their famous parts in my country.

✓ Also, whenever I visit foreign countries, I like to capture their famous landmarks.

Problems: incorrect reference and preposition ('their famous parts in my country' is nonsensical) (Grammar Problem Type IDs 12 and 11). The student likely meant to photograph famous landmarks of those countries. Suggestion: use 'their' to refer to the foreign countries and a correct noun such as 'landmarks' or 'sights'. Grammar problem type ID: 12 and 11

× I know there are many places where I can go and collect pictures of different beautiful scenes.

✓ I know there are many places I can visit to take pictures of different beautiful scenes.

Problems: word choice and verb collocation (Grammar Problem Type IDs 6 and 26). 'collect pictures' is awkward; common collocations are 'take pictures' or 'photograph'. 'where I can go and collect pictures' is wordy. Suggestion: use concise phrasing and common collocations: 'visit' and 'take pictures'. Grammar problem type ID: 6 and 26