Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; tránh dùng từ không chính xác hoặc lặp từ (ví dụ: “like more relaxed and chill”, “Tired of studying and walking” đứng riêng). Sử dụng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một hoặc hai câu bổ trợ với liên kết để giải thích lý do. Hãy chú ý phát âm từ nối và loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng (umm, uh).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because it helps me relax after a long day of studying and walking. For example, snapping a few shots of a sunset or a quiet street clears my mind and makes me feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Giảm việc lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (động từ số nhiều/số ít, danh từ cần mạo từ), dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: "vibe of fuel" là sai). Trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó so sánh rõ ràng bằng liên từ (for example, whereas, while) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể để minh họa sự khác biệt giữa hai loại cảnh quan.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views while I appreciate urban ones too. Urban areas are busy and colorful, with crowded streets and bright lights, whereas rural areas are calm and peaceful, with open fields and quiet paths that make me feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Sửa thông tin sai (Vietnam is a developing country, not "still a developed country") và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh chính xác. Bổ sung liên từ để làm cho lập luận mạch lạc (for example, because, whereas) và tránh những cụm từ không chính xác như "a more beautiful" — cần dùng tính từ đầy đủ hoặc danh từ hợp lệ.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in some other countries because air pollution in parts of Vietnam can spoil a landscape. For example, cities in England or the US often have better air quality and well-maintained parks, which makes their views appear clearer and more attractive.

× Of course yes, I love taking pictures because I can feel like more relaxed and chill after a whole day.

✓ Of course, I love taking pictures because they make me feel more relaxed and chilled after a whole day.

Use present simple for general truths: 'pictures make me feel' (subject-verb agreement and correct verb choice). Replace 'I can feel like more relaxed and chill' with 'they make me feel more relaxed and chilled' for natural English and correct collocation. Suggestions: Use 'they make me feel' for cause-effect, ensure subject and verb agree, and use adjective form 'relaxed' and 'chilled'.

× Tired of studying and walking.

✓ I am tired from studying and walking.

This fragment lacks a subject and finite verb. Add 'I am' to form a complete sentence and use 'tired from' or 'tired of' appropriately. Suggestions: Always include subject and verb; use 'tired from' to indicate the cause.

× Umm, I think different area have the different uh, vibe of fuel, urban area have uh, have a like a busy, busy and busy and colorful view vibe, and rural area have a more relaxed and peace peace.

✓ Umm, I think different areas have different vibes: urban areas have a busy, colorful vibe, and rural areas have a more relaxed and peaceful one.

Make nouns and verbs agree in number: use plural 'areas' with 'have' and plural 'vibes'. Remove redundant words and correct collocations: 'peaceful' not 'peace'. Use 'one' to avoid repetition. Suggestions: Match singular/plural consistently, avoid repetition, and use adjectives correctly.

× Umm, my country, Vietnam, it's still umm a developed country.

✓ Umm, my country, Vietnam, is still a developing country.

Contextually Taiwan: sentence used 'developed' but then mentions pollution, so 'developing' fits; also 'it's still umm a developed country' has unnecessary 'a' with 'country' after naming — better: 'Vietnam is still a developing country.' Use correct verb 'is' without contraction for clarity. Suggestions: Choose correct adjective ('developing' vs 'developed') and keep simple 'Vietnam is...'. Note: if intended 'developed', keep consistency with meaning.

× So there's still like a lot of pollution, like air pollution.

✓ So there is still a lot of pollution, especially air pollution.

Contraction 'there's' is acceptable but avoid filler 'like'; 'a lot of' is correct. Use 'especially' to clarify the type. Suggestions: Remove filler words, use 'there is/there are' correctly and specify the pollutant.

× So it's make the view not beautiful like another, another have developed country like America or England.

✓ So it makes the view less beautiful than in more developed countries like America or England.

Incorrect verb form 'make' should be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement) and comparative structure should be 'less beautiful than in...'. Also 'another, another have developed country' is ungrammatical; correct to 'more developed countries'. Suggestions: Use 'makes' for third-person singular, and form comparisons with 'less... than' and 'more developed countries'.

× They have a more beautiful.

✓ They are more beautiful.

'Have a more beautiful' is incorrect; use 'are more beautiful' to describe the appearance of places. 'Have' is not used for being beautiful. Suggestions: Use 'be' verbs to describe states or qualities (e.g., 'are more beautiful').