Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and reorganize your response: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and misuse of verbs, and provide one specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Pay attention to correct word choice (e.g., 'take photos' or 'photograph,' not 'photography see'), verb forms, and sentence structure to make the answer natural and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me capture memorable moments and appreciate my surroundings. For example, I often photograph the city skyline at sunset, since the changing light makes the scene more dramatic and memorable.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or garbled words, and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'rural areas,' 'open landscapes,' 'mountains,' 'rivers'). Keep it to two to three clear sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because open landscapes and natural scenery feel more relaxing and refreshing than busy city streets. For example, I like watching the mountains and rivers after a stressful week because they help me unwind and feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear, direct answer and then contrast with a brief reason about other countries. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and link ideas with words like 'however' or 'on the other hand.' Provide specific examples of memories or novel experiences abroad to support your point.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and often hold personal memories, such as family trips to local lakes and mountains. However, I also enjoy views abroad for their novelty and different cultural features, for example, coastal scenery or historic cityscapes that I haven't experienced before.

× Yes, I enjoy thinking of different views uh because it helps me capture memorable moments and appreciate the beauty around me.

✓ Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because it helps me capture memorable moments and appreciate the beauty around me.

The student used the noun 'photography' and the verb phrase 'thinking of different views' incorrectly. This is a sentence structure and word-choice issue: 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund verb form (verb+ing) as the object, so 'photographing' is correct. Also 'different views' is better expressed as 'different scenes' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + verb-ing (e.g., 'enjoy photographing').

× For example, I often photography see this skyline at sunset to prefer the changing light and also the landscapes while hiking the remember the.

✓ For example, I often photograph the skyline at sunset to enjoy the changing light and to remember the landscapes while hiking.

Multiple issues: 'photography' is a noun whereas the verb form 'photograph' is needed; 'see' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'prefer' is wrong choice and tense — 'enjoy' fits; 'the remember the' is ungrammatical. This is mainly incorrect verb forms and sentence structure. Suggestion: use base verb 'photograph' or gerund 'photographing' appropriately, remove redundant verbs, and keep parallel infinitive forms ('to enjoy', 'to remember').

× I prefer is few in rural areas because I find open landscapes and nature sensory because it's more relaxing and refreshing than crowded site city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I find the open landscapes and nature more relaxing and refreshing than crowded city sites.

This sentence contains extraneous words ('is few', 'sensory', 'site') and incorrect word order. The structure should be 'I prefer X because I find Y more adjective than Z.' Also 'city sites' or 'urban areas' is more natural than 'site city'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words and use correct comparative phrase 'more relaxing and refreshing than'. Use 'the open landscapes' for specificity.

× Skype is for example watching filth mountains or river house me and one after a busy week.

✓ For example, watching the hills or a river calms me down after a busy week.

This original sentence has several incorrect words ('Skype', 'filth', 'house me and one') and wrong word order, making it nonsensical. The corrected sentence restores meaning: begin with 'For example,' then a gerund clause 'watching the hills or a river' and the result 'calms me down after a busy week.' Suggestion: use appropriate vocabulary ('hills' or 'mountains') and clear subject-verb structure.

× I prefer Fuse in my country because they are more familiar and often holds personal memories such as family trips to local mountains or lakes.

✓ I prefer views in my country because they are more familiar and often hold personal memories, such as family trips to local mountains or lakes.

Errors include wrong word 'Fuse' instead of 'views', subject-verb agreement ('they' refers to 'views' so verb should be plural 'hold' not 'holds'), and sentence structure. This matches subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issues. Suggestion: correct the noun and ensure verb agrees with plural subject.

× However, I also enjoy sensory abroad for its novelty and cultural difference.

✓ However, I also enjoy traveling abroad for its novelty and cultural differences.

'Sensory abroad' is incorrect; likely intended 'traveling abroad' or 'seeing places abroad'. 'Cultural difference' should be plural 'cultural differences'. This is word-choice and sentence structure error. Suggestion: use 'traveling abroad' and pluralize 'differences'.

× Lycosophytos in my own country, which?

✓ Sometimes I prefer staying in my own country; why is that?

This fragment 'Lycosophytos in my own country, which?' is unintelligible and lacks a verb and clear structure. It may be an attempted question or comment. The correction provides a grammatical alternative that fits conversation context. Suggestion: form complete sentences with subject and verb and clear punctuation.