Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more precise and natural: correct minor word choices, avoid redundancy, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, replace vague phrases like “best shows” with “best photos,” and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures when I travel, especially with my friends. For example, we often photograph scenic viewpoints and interesting restaurants to capture memories, and afterwards I usually post a few of the best photos on Instagram.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and phrasing, make the response more concise and cohesive. Use linking words to compare preferences (e.g., “although,” “however”). Replace incorrect words (e.g., “ruler” → “rural”, “reliably atmosphere” → “livelier atmosphere” or “vibrant atmosphere”) and give one specific example of what you like in each setting.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural scenery because the fresh air, trees and open landscapes help me relax and feel healthier. However, I also like urban views for their skyline and vibrant atmosphere, for example visiting a rooftop café to enjoy city lights.

Gợi ý: Fix many vocabulary and grammar errors, be specific and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two concrete details and one linking phrase for clarity. Replace unclear words (e.g., “Uip's,” “spectacular and spectacular,” “tall point forests,” “those grasses”) with accurate descriptions like “rolling hills,” “towering pine forests,” and avoid repeating adjectives.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and comforting. For example, when I travel north with friends I appreciate rolling hills, towering pine forests and clear mountain lakes, which help me relax more than visiting foreign places.

× I enjoy taking pictures when I travel, especially with my friends. We often take photos at restaurants or scenic spots to remember the trip, and later I share the best shows on Instagram.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures when I travel, especially with my friends. We often take photos at restaurants or scenic spots to remember the trip, and later I share the best shots on Instagram.

The word 'shows' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'shots' (photos). This is a word choice/spelling error affecting meaning. Suggestion: use 'shots' or 'photos' when referring to selected pictures.

× I find that ruler scenery appeals to me more because the fresh air, trees and open landscape help me relax and are healthier.

✓ I find that rural scenery appeals to me more because the fresh air, trees and open landscape help me relax and are healthier for me.

The word 'ruler' is a misspelling of 'rural' (adjective). Also 'are healthier' is vague; adding 'for me' clarifies the comparison. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'rural' and specify the referent for 'healthier'.

× However, urban views have their own charm too. I enjoy the skyline and reliably atmosphere when I want convenience and cultured activities.

✓ However, urban views have their own charm too. I enjoy the skyline and lively atmosphere when I want convenience and cultural activities.

'Reliably' is an adverb misused where the adjective 'lively' or 'reliable' was intended; 'lively atmosphere' fits better. 'Cultured' is an adjective describing people; use 'cultural activities' to refer to events or attractions. Suggestion: replace 'reliably' with 'lively' and 'cultured activities' with 'cultural activities'.

× I prefer the views in my own country because when I travel with my friends through northern areas with Uip's and spectacular and spectacular scenery, tall point forests and clear mountain lakes, those grasses feel more relaxing and familiar to me than visiting foreign places.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because when I travel with my friends through northern areas with unique and spectacular scenery, tall pine forests and clear mountain lakes, those places feel more relaxing and familiar to me than visiting foreign countries.

This sentence contains multiple problems: misspellings ('Uip's' should be 'unique'), repetition ('spectacular and spectacular'), incorrect noun 'point forests' likely 'pine forests', and 'grasses' is incorrect for 'places'. Also 'visiting foreign places' can be better as 'visiting foreign countries' for contrast. Suggestion: simplify and correct word choices to 'unique and spectacular scenery', 'tall pine forests', and 'those places', and use 'foreign countries' for clarity.