Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and simplify your response, avoid repetition, and add one clear reason and a short example. Keep under 4–5 sentences and use linking words like 'however' or 'so'. Also correct small phrasing errors (e.g., 'edge' → 'enjoy', 'a beautiful collection of mine' → 'my photo collection').

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to enjoy beautiful views in person rather than photograph them because I want to be fully present. However, I sometimes take pictures to add to my photo collection or to remember a special moment. For example, when I visit a stunning overlook, I might take one or two photos but mostly focus on the experience.

Gợi ý: Make your main point concise and avoid filler words. State a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases like 'any' and repetitive listing. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and a wide variety of restaurants. For example, cities offer interesting building designs and rooftop bars that I like to visit. Also, cities have many shops and entertainment options, so there is always something to do.

Gợi ý: Tighten grammar and give a clearer reason plus a concise example. Use correct noun forms and verb agreement (e.g., 'its landscapes' and 'features'). Add a linking word like 'for example' as you did, but keep sentences short and precise.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because its landscapes and distinctive architecture reflect our culture. For example, at rooftop restaurants I enjoy panoramic cityscapes where towers feature unique designs inspired by our history, which makes the scenery especially memorable.

× I prefer to enjoy my I prefer to edge my beautiful views in person rather than take photos.

✓ I prefer to enjoy my beautiful views in person rather than take photos.

The original sentence repeats phrases and contains a nonsensical fragment ('I prefer to edge my'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove the duplicate and incorrect fragment to make a clear sentence. Suggestion: state the preference once and keep a parallel structure ('prefer to enjoy... rather than take...').

× I would like to be fully present and be there for beautiful views, but sometimes I take pictures to add a beautiful collection of mine and to.

✓ I would like to be fully present and enjoy beautiful views, but sometimes I take pictures to add to my collection.

The sentence ends abruptly and uses awkward phrasing ('add a beautiful collection of mine and to'). This is a present participle/phrase construction and sentence structure problem (IDs 10 and 26). Use 'enjoy' instead of repeating 'be' and complete the infinitive phrase 'add to my collection.' Keep parallel verb forms and complete objects for clarity.

× I like to prefer being in urban area because I like architecture, the restaurants, the privilege of being in so much facilities, the building designs, uh, shopping malls and facilities that you can buy each and everything.

✓ I prefer being in urban areas because I like the architecture, the restaurants, the convenience of having so many facilities, the building designs, shopping malls, and the variety of things you can buy.

There are multiple issues: redundant verbs ('like to prefer'), singular/plural and article errors ('urban area' should be 'urban areas'; 'so much facilities' should be 'so many facilities'), and awkward phrasing ('you can buy each and everything'). These are adjective/adverb and quantifier errors (IDs 13 and 14) and article/plural issues (IDs 22 and 1). Use 'prefer' alone, ensure plural forms and correct quantifiers ('many'), and use clear nouns ('variety of things').

× You can shop a lot, You can go to clubs, you can go to any.

✓ You can shop a lot, go to clubs, or go anywhere you want.

The original has an incomplete clause ('you can go to any') and inconsistent capitalization. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Make the list parallel and complete the idea by providing 'anywhere you want.' Use consistent punctuation and lowercase after commas.

× I prefer views in my own country because it landscapes and distinctive architecture are beautiful.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because its landscapes and distinctive architecture are beautiful.

The sentence uses the wrong pronoun 'it' to refer to 'my own country.' This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12). Replace 'it' with the possessive pronoun 'its' to show that the landscapes and architecture belong to the country. Also ensure subject-verb agreement is maintained.

× For example, when I visit rooftop restaurants, I enjoy panoramic cityscapes where many towers features unique designs inspired our history and culture, which makes the view specially memorable.

✓ For example, when I visit rooftop restaurants, I enjoy panoramic cityscapes where many towers feature unique designs inspired by our history and culture, which makes the view especially memorable.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement ('towers features' should be 'towers feature'), missing preposition ('inspired our history' should be 'inspired by our history'), and wrong adverb ('specially' should be 'especially'). These are subject-verb agreement (ID 27), incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13). Correct the verb form, add the preposition 'by,' and use the correct adverb 'especially.'