Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and limit to 3–4 well-linked sentences. Add a specific example to make your answer more vivid. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I have loved photography since childhood because capturing light and color always makes me happy. For example, I often wake up early to photograph the sunrise at the nearby lake, which gives me beautiful reflections and peaceful scenes.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar: correct slips ("rule" → "rural") and remove hesitation. Give one clear reason and one brief supporting detail using a linking word like "because" or "so". Keep within 3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because their open spaces and natural light help me capture emotions more easily. For example, quiet fields at golden hour give me calm scenes and interesting shadows to photograph.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and hesitations: combine related points into one fluent sentence and give a concise reason with a brief example. Use linking words such as "because" and avoid repeating the country name unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because India offers tremendous variety in landscapes. For instance, I can photograph deserts, long coastlines and mountain ranges without traveling far, which keeps my work varied and interesting.

× Uh, since childhood, I have always had passion for photography and I love clicking pictures.

✓ Uh, since childhood, I have always had a passion for photography and I love taking pictures.

Missing article 'a' before 'passion' (article error) and 'clicking pictures' is a literal translation; native English prefers the gerund 'taking' in this context. Use 'a passion' for countable noun 'passion' and 'taking pictures' as the natural collocation.

× I feel that clicking pictures uh is an enriching task and it makes me feel immense joy.

✓ I feel that taking pictures is an enriching activity and it gives me immense joy.

Use 'taking pictures' instead of 'clicking pictures' for natural collocation; 'task' is awkward here so 'activity' fits better. Also replace 'makes me feel immense joy' with 'gives me immense joy' for more natural phrasing.

× So I love taking pictures of different views with sunset, sunrise or any picturesque views.

✓ So I love taking pictures of different views at sunset, sunrise or in any picturesque setting.

Use prepositions 'at sunset' and 'at sunrise' (preposition usage). Also avoid repeating 'views' and use 'setting' for variety and naturalness. This corrects preposition and wording.

× I prefer rule, I prefer views in rural areas because I feel that I have those eyes that can captivate, uh, emotions and imagination even in in blank spaces.

✓ I prefer rural areas; I feel that I have an eye for capturing emotions and imagination even in blank spaces.

'Prefer rule' is erroneous (word choice). Use 'I prefer rural areas'. 'Those eyes' is unnatural; use 'an eye for' (idiomatic). 'Can captivate emotions and imagination' should be 'capturing emotions and imagination'. Also fix doubled 'in in'. This addresses word choice, idiom, and redundancy.

× But I really like rural landscapes as it gives me calmness.

✓ But I really like rural landscapes as they give me calmness.

'Landscapes' is plural, so pronoun must be 'they' not 'it' (subject-verb agreement/pronoun use). Also 'give me calmness' is acceptable; alternatively 'make me feel calm' is more natural.

× I prefer views in my own country as India is uh, a land where everything is incredibly diverse.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, as India is a land where everything is incredibly diverse.

Add a comma for clarity. No major grammatical error besides punctuation and filler 'uh'. Pronoun issue not strong; kept for clarity.

× India has arid deserts, India has long coastlines, India has a lot of mountains ranges and beautiful scenery.

✓ India has arid deserts, long coastlines, many mountain ranges and beautiful scenery.

'Mountains ranges' is incorrect plural formation; correct is 'mountain ranges'. Also avoid repeating 'India has' for conciseness, and use 'many' with countable 'mountain ranges'.

× I feel that there are a lot of uh.

✓ I feel that there is a lot to see.

Sentence was incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete clause that fits context: 'there is a lot to see' conveys intended meaning. This corrects sentence fragment and improves coherence.