Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Améliorez la grammaire et la fluidité. Évitez les constructions maladroites (« I'll enjoy » avec un contexte présent) et les répétitions. Reformulez la réponse pour commencer par une phrase claire répondant à la question, puis ajoutez deux ou trois détails spécifiques (par exemple: types de paysages, moments de la journée, l'utilisation des photos). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. I find new landscapes very fulfilling, so I often photograph coastlines and city skylines to capture the mood. For instance, I like shooting at sunrise because the light makes colors more vivid, and I later look back at the photos to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Corrigez la prononciation et la clarté, et structurez la réponse: donnez une position claire puis deux raisons précises et un exemple. Évitez hésitations (« uh », répétitions) et erreurs de syntaxe. Utilisez des connecteurs comme « because » et « for example ».

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cityscapes feel lively and there are more interesting architectural details. For example, I enjoy photographing streets with cafes and tall buildings at dusk, as the lights create a vibrant atmosphere. Also, cities offer easy access to different vantage points, which makes taking photos more convenient.

Gợi ý: Améliorez la précision du vocabulaire et corrigez les erreurs (« respond here » n'est pas correct). Donnez une raison claire puis un exemple concret, et ajoutez une nuance si possible (par exemple, vous appréciez aussi certains paysages étrangers). Utilisez des mots de liaison pour la logique.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, the countryside near my hometown reminds me of childhood trips, so I like photographing those rolling hills. However, I also enjoy some foreign landscapes, especially when they offer very different scenery.

× Yes, I'll enjoy taking pictures of different views if especially when I am traveling and the new scenery will give me a sense of fulfillment, so I tend to picture them to have a better memory.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I am traveling, because the new scenery gives me a sense of fulfillment, so I tend to photograph it to remember it better.

The student mixed future and present tenses incorrectly (use of 'I'll enjoy' and 'will give' with a habitual context). Use simple present for habitual likes: 'I enjoy'. Also use present simple for general truths: 'the new scenery gives'. 'Picture them to have a better memory' is awkward; use 'photograph it to remember it better'. Keep tense consistent and choose appropriate verbs; avoid unnecessary words like 'if' before 'especially'. Suggestions: use simple present for regular preferences, combine ideas with commas, choose precise verbs (photograph, remember).

× Actually, I tend to choose urban landscapes because in city you, your life will be more convenient and you can get anything from uh, in at in at most whenever.

✓ Actually, I tend to choose urban landscapes because in the city your life is more convenient and you can get almost anything whenever.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'city' and inappropriate word order and filler words. Also tense should be simple present for general statements: 'your life is more convenient' not 'will be'. 'Can get anything from uh, in at in at most whenever' is ungrammatical; replace with 'can get almost anything whenever'. Suggestions: use 'the city' for a specific environment, use simple present for general truths, remove fillers and redundant prepositions, and use 'almost' to qualify 'anything'.

× So this is better for me.

✓ So that is better for me.

This sentence is acceptable but 'that' is more natural to refer back to the previous idea. The original is not strictly incorrect but using 'that' clarifies the reference. Suggestion: use 'that' or rephrase 'I prefer that' to make the connection explicit.

× Compared to other countries, I prefer the views in my own country because I respond here and I have been used to it.

✓ Compared to other countries, I prefer the views in my own country because I grew up here and I am used to them.

'I respond here' is incorrect; likely intended 'I reside' or 'I grew up'. Use 'grew up' or 'live' depending on meaning. 'Have been used to it' should be 'am used to them' with correct pronoun agreement for 'views'. Also use simple present 'I prefer' is correct. Suggestions: choose correct verb ('live', 'reside', 'grew up') and match pronouns in number ('them' for plural 'views'), use 'am used to' for current habituation.

× If I go abroad, the scenery will be very unfamiliar for me.

✓ If I go abroad, the scenery will be very unfamiliar to me.

Preposition error: use 'unfamiliar to me' not 'unfamiliar for me'. The conditional structure 'If I go abroad, the scenery will be...' is acceptable. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'to' with 'unfamiliar' and keep future 'will be' for hypothetical future situations.