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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like taking pictures of different news because I think taking pictures make me happy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer we will see in rural areas because rural areas take me something and and flexibly professionalship and I also like Uber Uber areas because I think this time is really really.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer we will sing in other countries because I really be same table in our country so I want to look so many different values.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答需要更自然且更直接回应问题。注意词汇使用(“news”错误,应为“views”/“scenery”),并用一到两句补充理由或例子。控制在最多五句内,避免重复。可以先给主题句,然后用连接词补充细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography lifts my mood. For example, I often photograph sunrise scenes in my neighborhood, which helps me relax and remember special moments.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不清楚且语法混乱。要直接表明偏好(城市或乡村),使用清晰的理由并用连接词(例如“because”或“however”)组织句子。避免重复发音错误(如“Uber Uber”)。提供具体细节说明为什么喜欢某种景色。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and full of natural beauty. For instance, I like wide fields and quiet rivers which make me feel calm and offer great photo opportunities.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更明确地表达比较和原因。直接说你更喜欢国外还是本国的景色,并解释具体原因(例如文化差异、风景多样性)。使用连贯的句子并提供一两个具体例子。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to photograph traditional markets in Asia and coastal cliffs in Europe to experience new perspectives.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different news because I think taking pictures make me happy.

Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think taking pictures make me happy.

原句将 news(不可数/指新闻)用作“景色”的意思不正确,应使用 views(景色、风景)。此外,句中主语“taking pictures”为动名词短语,作主语时可视为单数或复数,但保留原句“make me happy”也可以;不过可更自然改为“makes me happy”。建议改为:"I like taking pictures of different views because I think taking pictures make/makes me happy." 更推荐使用单数动词:"...because I think taking pictures makes me happy."(将“news”改为“views”,并将动词与主语一致)

Verb in the present participle form

× I prefer we will see in rural areas because rural areas take me something and and flexibly professionalship and I also like Uber Uber areas because I think this time is really really.

I prefer to see rural areas because rural areas give me something and feel more relaxed, and I also like urban areas because I think they are very interesting.

原句多处问题: 1) “I prefer we will see” 结构错误,应使用不定式或直接宾语,正确为“I prefer to see”或“I prefer seeing”。属于动名词/不定式使用错误(归类为“Verb in the present participle form”/动词形式错误)。 2) “rural areas take me something” 英语表达错误,应使用 give/offer 或 feel 表达感受,改为“give me something”或“offer me something”。 3) “and and flexibly professionalship” 完全不通,应改为“feel more relaxed”或其他能表达“更灵活/更放松”的短语。不要使用不存在的单词“professionalship”。 4) “Uber Uber areas” 明显是“urban areas”的错拼,改为“urban areas”。 5) “this time is really really” 未完成,应补全为“they are very interesting”或“they are really lively”等符合语境的描述。 建议用法:"I prefer to see rural areas because they give me something and make me feel relaxed, and I also like urban areas because I think they are very interesting."

Verb in the present participle form

× I prefer we will sing in other countries because I really be same table in our country so I want to look so many different values.

I prefer to travel to other countries because life is very similar in my country, so I want to see many different cultures.

原句问题总结: 1) “I prefer we will sing in other countries” 不合语法且词不达意,应为“I prefer to travel/go to/visit other countries”。 2) “I really be same table in our country” 完全错误的句子结构与动词形式,应表达“在我国生活很相似”可用“life is very similar in my country”或“My life is very similar in my country”。属于动词形式和句子结构错误(动词时态/形式以及句子结构),本例归为动词现在分词/形式问题。 3) “so I want to look so many different values” 用词不当,应为“see many different cultures/values”或“experience different cultures”。 建议改为:"I prefer to travel to other countries because life is very similar in my country, so I want to see many different cultures."

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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