Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and use clear vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I do), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word choice errors (e.g. 'taking photos' not 'taking picture apps').

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of views because they help me save daily memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes, which remind me of where I was and how I felt that day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (I prefer urban/rural) and give clear reasons with linking words (because, while). Use specific descriptions (e.g. 'bustling streets' or 'open fields') and correct contradictory words (urban = busy, rural = peaceful). Keep to two or three supporting sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love the open fields and quiet atmosphere. While urban areas have interesting architecture and lively streets, rural landscapes feel more relaxing and natural to me.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement (I prefer views in other countries) and give specific reasons. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct grammar (plural/singular, articles). Mention concrete examples of places or types of scenery to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and scenery. For example, I would love to see the snowy mountains in Switzerland and the colorful markets in Morocco, which are very different from the landscapes at home.

× Yes, I really like taking picture apps on the view that I see because whenever I taken them I it's it's look like that I am saving the memories about my daily day.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of the views that I see because whenever I take them it feels like I am saving memories of my daily life.

Errors: 'picture apps' is incorrect noun choice and plural; use 'pictures'. 'on the view' should be 'of the views'. 'whenever I taken them' uses past participle without auxiliary; correct is 'whenever I take them' (present simple for habitual action). 'I it's it's look like that' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it feels like'. 'saving the memories about my daily day' is awkward; use 'saving memories of my daily life'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and verb tenses for habitual actions and simplify phrases for clarity.

× To me, the pot fields have their Rd. specification aspects.

✓ To me, the paddy fields have their own specific aspects.

Errors: 'pot fields' is likely a wrong word choice; 'paddy fields' or 'cotton fields' may be intended. 'Rd. specification' is incorrect abbreviation and word order. Use 'their own specific aspects' to express distinctive qualities. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and use 'own' + adjective + noun order.

× Uh, for the urban areas I like the peaceful, very peaceful in this view and for the rural areas I like the beauty of the busy.

✓ For urban areas I like the peaceful, calm feeling of the scene, and for rural areas I like the beauty of the busy activity.

Errors: 'the peaceful, very peaceful in this view' is redundant and awkward; use 'peaceful, calm feeling of the scene'. 'the beauty of the busy' lacks a noun after 'busy' — add 'activity' to clarify. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and supply the correct noun after adjectives.

× To me, I prefer the view in other country most because they are quite different to me and there are so many beautiful places in the world.

✓ To me, I prefer views in other countries most because they are quite different from what I'm used to, and there are so many beautiful places in the world.

Errors: 'the view in other country' should be plural 'views in other countries' and 'in' with singular country is wrong. 'different to me' is nonstandard in many varieties of English; use 'different from what I'm used to' or 'different to me' could be dialectal but clearer to use 'different from'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'they are' refers to 'views' so keep plural. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences and correct preposition 'different from'.

× So it is also my dream to that I can travel around the world to enjoy the view.

✓ So it is also my dream that I can travel around the world to enjoy the views.

Errors: 'to that I can' mixes infinitive and clause incorrectly. Use 'my dream that I can...' or better 'my dream to travel around the world to enjoy the views.' Also pluralize 'views' for generality. Suggestion: simplify to 'my dream to travel around the world to enjoy the views' or 'my dream is to travel around the world to enjoy the views.'