Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, correct grammar, and give a specific example with linking words. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "sunsets over the sea" not "sunset of the sea of the sky").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes when I travel because I enjoy capturing changing light and atmosphere. For example, I like taking photos of sunsets over the sea, when the sky turns orange and reflections appear on the water.

Gợi ý: Provide a full, grammatical topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb agreement. Mention concrete details about what you like in rural views.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they have fresher air and more trees, which help me relax. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet country lanes and forests where the light filters through the leaves.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a clear preference and coherent supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "because") and avoid fragmented sentences. Explain why views at home or abroad appeal to you, with a concise example.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, especially rural areas near Hunan, because I am familiar with the landscapes and cultural scenery. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to see different architecture and coastal views, which inspire new photographic ideas.

× For example, sunset of the sea of the sky at night.

✓ For example, the sunset over the sea or the sky at night.

The original sentence is fragmentary and lacks clear structure and articles; this is a sentence structure error. Add the definite article 'the' and use a preposition ('over') to show the relationship between 'sunset' and 'sea', and provide a clearer alternative ('or the sky') to make the example coherent. Suggestion: Complete the clause, include necessary articles, and use appropriate prepositions (e.g., 'the sunset over the sea').

× Actually, I enjoy. Rural areas, because it have very fresh air and very very much trees can make me relax.

✓ Actually, I enjoy rural areas because they have very fresh air and many trees that help me relax.

Multiple subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issues: 'it have' is incorrect because 'it' does not agree with plural 'rural areas' (use 'they have'). 'Very very much trees' is ungrammatical — use 'many trees' or 'a lot of trees'. Also combine fragments into one coherent sentence. Suggestion: Use plural pronoun 'they' for plural subjects, 'have' as the verb, and 'many' for countable nouns. Relevant problem types: subject-verb agreement and quantifier usage (IDs 27 and 14).

× I'm from Hunan, Changsha, it is the capital city. Actually I like rural. City more because.

✓ I'm from Changsha in Hunan; it is the capital city. Actually, I prefer rural areas more than the city because...

The original contains comma splices and fragmented sentences. 'I'm from Hunan, Changsha, it is the capital city.' should be split or joined correctly with a semicolon or separate sentences. 'Actually I like rural. City more because.' are fragments and misordered. Suggestion: Use proper punctuation to separate clauses and complete the comparative phrase 'prefer rural areas more than the city' and finish with a reason. Also this addresses sentence structure and comparative expression errors.