Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (why you like it or what kinds of views you prefer). Use a linking word and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and rivers because I like capturing how light changes throughout the day. This hobby helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss.

Gợi ý: Be more accurate and coherent. Start with a clear preference, give two specific reasons, and use a linking word (for example, because or since). Avoid vague or contradictory statements (e.g., farms are usually rural). Keep sentences concise and factual.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because they offer a mix of architecture and public spaces. For example, I enjoy photographing rivers, historic temples and busy markets in the city, since these scenes show both cultural life and interesting contrasts.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement of preference, then give specific examples and a concise reason. Use linking words (for example, because or such as) and correct nouns and articles (e.g., the Taj Mahal, Red Fort). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking views in my own country because it has many famous landmarks and coastal scenes. For example, I would love to photograph the Taj Mahal and the Red Fort, as well as popular rivers and beaches, since these places reflect my culture and history.

× Yes, I like to take pictures in different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' is often followed by the gerund (-ing) when describing hobbies or general preferences. 'Like to take' is not strictly wrong but 'like taking' is more natural here; also use 'of different views' to indicate what is being photographed rather than 'in'. Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures of different views.'

× I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas we can see the Graintree farms, temple and river, but in rural area we cannot see all those.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas we can see the Graintree farms, temples, and rivers, but in rural areas we cannot see all of those.

Several nouns are countable and should be plural when speaking generally: 'temple' -> 'temples', 'river' -> 'rivers'. Also use 'rural areas' to match 'urban areas'. Use 'all of those' for clarity. Suggestion: make countable nouns plural and keep consistent plural forms for 'areas.'

× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This line appears as the examiner's question; if treated as student's reply, the correct form is the examiner's original. No preposition error if kept as question. (If student intended to answer, they should use 'in my own country' or 'in other countries.')

× I prefer to use in my own country.

✓ I prefer to visit places in my own country.

The original sentence misuses 'use' and has an unclear pronoun/object. 'Prefer to use in my own country' is ungrammatical. Assuming the student meant preferring to see/visit places, use 'prefer to visit places in my own country.' Also include the object 'places' and preposition 'in.'

× There are several places and heritage which I wish to visit there like Taj Mahal, Lal Kila and so many popular rivers and beach.

✓ There are several places and heritage sites that I would like to visit, such as the Taj Mahal, Lal Qila, and many famous rivers and beaches.

Use 'heritage sites' rather than 'heritage'; change 'which' to 'that' or 'which' with comma; 'wish to visit there like' is awkward—use 'would like to visit, such as'. 'So many popular rivers and beach' needs plural 'beaches' and 'famous' is more natural than 'popular.' Also include definite articles for well-known monuments: 'the Taj Mahal.' Suggestion: use 'heritage sites' and correct plural/singular and article usage.'

× So I want to take a view in my own country.

✓ So I want to take photos of views in my own country.

'Take a view' is incorrect English; we 'take photos' or 'take pictures of a view.' Use the noun 'photos' and 'of views' to express photographing landscapes. Suggestion: say 'take photos of views in my own country.'