Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve fluency by removing filler words (uh), correct grammar (singular/plural, article use), and make sentences more concise. Add one clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Be specific (e.g., what equipment or moments).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenery like rivers, sunsets and green fields. For example, when I travel I often use my phone to capture the sky at sunset because the colors change quickly, and I keep these photos to remember those moments.

Gợi ý: Organize the response: start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons with linking words. Remove repetitions and fix vocabulary/phrasing (e.g., 'open spaces'). Keep within 3–4 sentences and provide concrete examples.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels peaceful and refreshing. For instance, I enjoy walking beside lakes and through green fields where there is lots of open space. However, urban scenes can be attractive at night because of the buildings and city lights.

Gợi ý: Clarify the main point: state preference clearly (own country vs other) and give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'natural places', 'cultural scenery'). Provide a concise example comparing familiar vs novel experiences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to familiar landscapes and cultural sites. For example, I love visiting local national parks where I grew up, but I also enjoy exploring foreign scenery when I travel because it offers new perspectives and experiences.

× Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery like rivers, sunset and green fields gases uh my attention.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery like rivers, sunsets and green fields that catch my attention.

Incorrect or missing plural form for 'sunset' and wrong phrase 'green fields gases uh my attention'. Use plural 'sunsets' to match 'rivers' and 'green fields', and replace the garbled phrase with 'that catch my attention' to use correct adjective clause and verb usage. Suggestion: ensure nouns that are part of a list share correct number and substitute a clear relative clause to express attention.

× I like capturing beautiful moments because photo helps previous memories.

✓ I like capturing beautiful moments because photos help preserve memories.

The original uses singular 'photo' and incorrect verb 'helps previous memories'. Use plural 'photos' to match general statement and use the base verb 'help' for plural subject. Replace 'previous' with 'preserve' (verb) to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: choose correct verb form and word to convey 'keep memories'.

× Sometimes I take uh picture when I travel uh or visit new place.

✓ Sometimes I take a picture when I travel or visit a new place.

Missing article 'a' before 'picture' and 'a' before 'new place'; filler 'uh' should be omitted in writing. Also 'when I travel or visit a new place' is fine as present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: include necessary articles and remove speech fillers.

× All rural areas yes I yes.

✓ I prefer rural areas, yes.

The original is disfluent and uses 'All rural areas yes I yes' which is ungrammatical. A concise correction keeps meaning and proper word order. Suggestion: in brief answers, use a clear subject-verb structure and avoid repetition.

× I prefer views in rural areas more than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas.

Comparative preference should be expressed with 'prefer X to Y' or 'more than' but then maintain clear reference. Original is understandable but awkward; corrected sentence uses 'to those in urban areas' for clarity and agreement between plural 'views' and pronoun 'those'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons and ensure matching number.

× Countryside scenery feels peaceful and refreshing.

✓ The countryside scenery feels peaceful and refreshing.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'countryside scenery' when referring to a general class of scenery in that area. Use present simple 'feels' is correct for general statement. Suggestion: include 'the' when specifying a particular type of scenery.

× I like green fields, lakes and open 6.

✓ I like green fields, lakes and open spaces.

The fragment 'open 6' is likely a transcription error. Use 'open spaces' to list types of scenery. Also maintain plural forms. Suggestion: ensure words are transcribed correctly and pluralize consistently.

× Urban views can be interesting because because of all building and city lights.

✓ Urban views can be interesting because of all the buildings and city lights.

Duplicate 'because' should be reduced to one. Use 'because of' followed by noun phrase; pluralize 'building' to 'buildings' and include 'the' for specificity. Suggestion: avoid repetition and ensure correct prepositional structure.

× Find the reviews in my own country, but I also like exploring views in other countries.

✓ I find the views in my own country familiar, but I also like exploring views in other countries.

Original 'Find the reviews' is incorrect verb and 'reviews' is wrong noun. Replace with 'I find the views ... familiar' to express personal connection. Keep present simple tense for general preference. Suggestion: choose correct verb ('find') with proper subject and correct noun ('views').

× So my country has many different natural place, places and cultural scenario.

✓ My country has many different natural places and cultural scenes.

Article and plural errors: use plural 'places' to agree with 'many', remove redundancy, and replace 'scenario' with 'scenes' or 'settings' to mean cultural environments. Suggestion: match quantifiers ('many') with plural nouns and avoid redundant words.

× I feel connected to this place because they are familiar to me at the same time.

✓ I feel connected to these places because they are familiar to me.

Pronoun mismatch: 'this place' (singular) conflicts with 'they are' (plural). Use plural 'these places' to match 'they', and remove unnecessary 'at the same time'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and remove extraneous phrases.