Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki kelancaran dan tata bahasa. Jawaban sering tidak jelas karena pengulangan, filler (uh, I I) dan kesalahan tata bahasa (mis. "it's make me" seharusnya "it makes me"). Berikan satu kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik tentang apa yang Anda simpan (mis. pemandangan, momen) dan kapan Anda mengambil foto. Hindari pengulangan dan filler.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes when I travel so I can look back at those memories later.

Gợi ý: Tingkatkan kejelasan dan struktur jawaban. Mulai dengan pernyataan tegas (I prefer...), lalu jelaskan alasan spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung (because, for example). Perbaiki tata bahasa (mis. "it's make me" → "they interest me") dan hindari pengulangan kata. Sertakan contoh konkret (gedung atau aktivitas) untuk memperkaya jawaban.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy photographing architecture and street life. For example, I like capturing tall buildings and busy markets because the details and activities make each photo interesting.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki organisasi dan koherensi. Mulai dengan jawaban langsung (I prefer...), kemudian jelaskan alasan dengan perbandingan konkret antara negaramu dan luar negeri. Hindari pengulangan dan penggunaan frasa tidak lengkap. Tambahkan contoh spesifik tentang apa yang ingin Anda coba foto di negara lain.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in other countries because I can capture different cultures and landscapes. For example, I would like to photograph traditional markets and unique architecture abroad, which are quite different from what I usually see at home.

× Yes, I like uh taking a picture of different views 'cause it's make me have a lot of memory.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me save many memories.

The original sentence has several issues: 'taking a picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' to match 'different views' (singular/plural mismatch - use Grammar Problem Type 1); 'it's make me have a lot of memory' is ungrammatical because 'make' should be 'makes' with singular subject 'it' (third person singular - Grammar Problem Type 2) and the structure 'have a lot of memory' is unnatural. Use 'they help me save many memories' which uses a clear subject-verb agreement and natural collocation. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match general statements and choose natural verbs (help/save) for expressing storing memories.

× I can save my new memory and after that I can make a memory in my phone.

✓ I can save new memories, and after that I can store them on my phone.

The phrase 'make a memory in my phone' is incorrect word choice and structure. 'Make a memory' is unnatural; use 'store memories' or 'save memories'. Also pluralize 'memory' to 'memories' to match 'new' used in general sense (Grammar Problem Type 1). Use 'on my phone' as correct preposition (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: use 'save' or 'store' + plural 'memories' and 'on' for devices.

× Even I I don't know I just like I just carry if I don't no, not uh feel the.

✓ Sometimes I don't know why; I just carry my camera even when I don't feel like it.

This sentence is fragmented and unclear (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'I just carry if I don't no, not feel the' is ungrammatical. Correct by making a clear clause: 'I just carry my camera even when I don't feel like it.' Also fix double 'I' and 'don't no' (incorrect negation) which are grammatical errors (Grammar Problem Type 12 for pronoun repetition and general sentence structure). Suggestion: form a single coherent sentence, use 'even when I don't feel like it' to express unwillingness.

× I prefer and I think it's like in Uber urban areas, 'cause I like take a picture about building and it's make me so interesting when I see the building and any activity, any activities that was it so interesting and I also like to.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like taking pictures of buildings; it makes me very interested when I see buildings and activities, which I find so interesting.

Multiple problems: awkward filler 'I prefer and I think it's like in Uber urban areas' — use 'I prefer urban areas' (remove redundancy). 'Uber' likely mispronounced 'inner' or extra; remove it. 'I like take a picture' should be 'I like taking pictures' (verb + -ing error - Grammar Problem Type 8). 'It's make me so interesting' is incorrect: 'it makes me very interested' (third person singular agreement - Grammar Problem Type 2 and incorrect use of adjective/adverb - Grammar Problem Type 13). 'Any activity, any activities that was it so interesting' has tense and number problems; use 'activities, which I find very interesting' (present tense and correct relative clause). Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures of...' and 'it makes me interested' or 'I find ... interesting'.

× I prefer and I think it's like in Uber urban areas, 'cause I like take a picture about building and it's make me so interesting when I see the building and any activity, any activities that was it so interesting and I also like to.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like taking pictures of buildings and find activities there very interesting.

Condensed correction focusing on tense and agreement: 'I like take' should be 'I like taking' (verb + -ing - Grammar Problem Type 8), 'it's make me so interesting' should be 'it makes me interested' (third person singular - Grammar Problem Type 2 and adjective/adverb error - Grammar Problem Type 13), and 'that was it so interesting' mixes past tense incorrectly; use present 'find ... interesting' (present tense issue - Grammar Problem Type 6). Suggestion: use consistent present tense and correct verb forms.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This question sentence from the examiner is already correct; no correction needed. Keep as is.

× I think, I think I'm prefer in another countries cause in my own country is really good.

✓ I think I prefer other countries, although my own country is really nice.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect because 'prefer' is a stative verb and should not use progressive form 'I'm prefer' (Grammar Problem Type 6 present tense issue and Grammar Problem Type 4 modal/verb form). Also 'in another countries' mixes singular/plural and wrong preposition: use 'other countries' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 11). Suggestion: use simple present 'I prefer other countries' and 'my own country is really nice'.

× But I think I have take a picture mostly I take a picture about the same about the same thing, but and I want to try.

✓ But I think I mostly take pictures of the same things, and I want to try something different.

'I have take a picture' is ungrammatical (past participle needed - Grammar Problem Type 9) and awkward tense. Use 'I mostly take pictures' (simple present for habitual action - Grammar Problem Type 6). 'a picture' vs 'pictures' and 'the same about the same thing' is repetitive and needs pluralization 'the same things' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: use 'mostly take pictures of the same things' and finish the idea with 'try something different'.