Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “make a deal,” “create a real to”). Use accurate verbs and concise expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, whenever I go out I take pictures and short videos of landscapes and street scenes to remember the moment. I especially like capturing light and color because they make the photos more vivid.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve further, tighten the structure: give a concise topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use present-tense consistency (avoid mixing past tense like ‘helped’ unless you mean past experiences).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy mountains and fresh air. For example, I often go hiking there to relax and to appreciate the wide landscapes and wildlife.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer to the question and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer views in my own country”), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and repetitions.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy discovering new regions close to home. For instance, there are many towns and natural parks I haven’t visited yet, so I like to travel domestically to learn more about local landscapes and culture.

× For example, whenever go to outside, I take a lot of pictures and short videos to make a deal, to create a real to, and I love to preserve that moment.

✓ For example, whenever I go outside, I take a lot of pictures and short videos to create a real memory, and I love to preserve that moment.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'go' and contains unclear phrases like 'to make a deal' and 'to create a real to.' These are sentence structure and word choice problems. Add the subject, replace unclear phrases with 'create a real memory' to express intention, and keep parallel structure using 'and' to connect actions. Suggestion: always include the subject for clauses and use precise nouns for intended meaning.

× Yes, I prefer using on country because I love to, uh, explore my country.

✓ Yes, I prefer staying in my country because I love to, uh, explore it.

The phrase 'using on country' is incorrect preposition and verb choice. Use 'in' for being within a country and 'stay' or 'live' instead of 'using.' Also replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'it' for natural English. Suggestion: use correct prepositions with locations ('in' a country) and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× There are a lot of places where I didn't go yet.

✓ There are a lot of places I haven't been to yet.

The original mixes past simple negative with 'yet' awkwardly. 'Places' is plural correctly, but the verb form should be present perfect ('haven't been to') to indicate experiences up to now. Also move 'yet' to the end. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'yet' when talking about experiences not done up to now: 'haven't been to yet.'

× That's why I love to explore my my own country.

✓ That's why I love to explore my own country.

The sentence contains a duplicated word 'my my,' which is a typographical error and a pronoun repetition. Remove the extra 'my' to correct the pronoun usage. Suggestion: proofread to remove accidental word duplication and ensure pronouns appear once and match the noun they modify.

× The quiet mountain atmosphere helped me relax and I often go hiking there to fully appreciate the scenery and feel surrounded by nature.

✓ The quiet mountain atmosphere helps me relax, and I often go hiking there to fully appreciate the scenery and feel surrounded by nature.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present habitual 'I often go.' To describe a habitual preference use present simple 'helps.' Maintain consistent tense for general truths and habits. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and general characteristics ('helps me relax').

× I love photography. I love to capture beautiful moments, beautiful, beautiful scenes.

✓ I love photography; I love to capture beautiful moments and scenes.

The repetition 'beautiful, beautiful scenes' is redundant and the clausal connection can be smoother. Combine into one sentence with 'and' or a semicolon to avoid choppiness. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and connect related ideas for fluency.

× and I love to preserve that moment.

✓ I also love to preserve those moments.

Beginning with 'and' is informal and 'that moment' refers vaguely; plural 'those moments' matches earlier 'pictures and short videos.' Use 'also' to connect and pluralize for consistency. Suggestion: prefer 'I also...' instead of starting sentences with 'and' in formal responses and maintain number agreement with previous references.

× The quiet mountain atmosphere helped me relax and I often go hiking there to fully appreciate the scenery and feel surrounded by nature.

✓ The quiet mountain atmosphere helps me relax and I often go hiking there to fully appreciate the scenery and feel surrounded by nature.

As above, 'helps' is third person singular present to match subject 'The quiet mountain atmosphere.' The original used 'helped' which is past tense; correcting to 'helps' fixes both tense and third person singular agreement. Suggestion: use 'helps' for present habitual or general statements about what a singular subject does.