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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Actually I'm not interested in to take a picture. I usually forgot to take photos when I travel. I prefer enjoy the views with my own eyes.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Personally I like lunar views more. I enjoy looking at the mountains and rivers. It's much more peaceful than the city.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I like both. My country has a good place but I like seeing new things in another country. It depends what I want at the times.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Focus on grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid infinitive errors (e.g., "interested in taking"), use correct verb forms and tense consistency, and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add one short reason supported by a detail using a linking word such as "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Not really. I'm not very interested in taking pictures because I prefer enjoying the view with my own eyes. For example, when I travel I often forget my camera, so I choose to soak in the scenery instead.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Use accurate vocabulary and a clear topic sentence. Correct the word choice error ("lunar" → "rural") and connect ideas with a linking phrase like "because" or "so". Add one specific detail to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy mountains and rivers. For instance, I like walking along quiet trails and listening to birds, which feels much more peaceful than noisy city streets.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: Give a clearer, structured response: topic sentence, brief reason, and a specific example. Fix phrasing and grammar (e.g., "good places", "depends on what I want at the time"). Use a linking word such as "however" to contrast options.

Ví dụ: I like both my country and other countries for different reasons. For example, my country has familiar, beautiful spots that feel comfortable, but I also enjoy visiting abroad to discover new landscapes and cultures.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Actually I'm not interested in to take a picture.

Actually I'm not interested in taking pictures.

After the expression 'interested in' a gerund (verb + -ing) is required, not the infinitive with 'to'. Also use the plural 'pictures' for general preference. Suggestion: use 'interested in taking' + noun (pictures).

Past tense issue

× I usually forgot to take photos when I travel.

I usually forget to take photos when I travel.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, which requires the simple present 'forget' rather than the simple past 'forgot'. Use present simple for repeated or habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'usually forget' to describe habits.

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer enjoy the views with my own eyes.

I prefer enjoying the views with my own eyes.

After the verb 'prefer' when followed by a verb, use either 'to' + infinitive or the gerund. Here the gerund form 'enjoying' is required if no 'to' is used. Alternatively 'I prefer to enjoy the views with my own eyes.' Suggestion: choose 'prefer enjoying' or 'prefer to enjoy'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Personally I like lunar views more.

Personally I prefer rural views more.

The original uses 'lunar' (relating to the moon), which is likely incorrect given context contrasting urban and rural areas. The intended adjective is 'rural'. Ensure word choice matches meaning. Suggestion: use 'rural' for countryside views.

Sentence structure errors

× My country has a good place but I like seeing new things in another country.

My country has many beautiful places, but I also like seeing new things in other countries.

The phrase 'has a good place' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'has many beautiful places' for general positive description. Also maintain number agreement: 'another country' vs 'other countries' — 'other countries' fits general preference. Suggestion: rephrase to a natural plural form and add 'also' for contrast.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It depends what I want at the times.

It depends on what I want at the time.

The correct structure is 'depend on something' — include the preposition 'on'. 'At the times' is unidiomatic; use 'at the time' to mean depending on the specific occasion. Also 'depends on what I want' is the correct word order. Suggestion: use 'It depends on what I want at the time.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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