Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, and, because) correctly and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph the sunset from my condo window because the warm colors and peaceful atmosphere help me relax and unwind.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary details about studies unless they support the preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views. Urban areas appeal to me for their lively cityscapes and modern architecture, while rural areas are peaceful and full of natural beauty, so each has its own charm.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, then give specific examples and reasons in a short, coherent sentence. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., architecture, beaches, technology) and correct phrasing to express comparisons.

Ví dụ: I prefer views from other countries. For instance, I admire foreign beaches, sunsets, and modern architecture shown online because their design and technology often look more advanced and fascinating to me.

× Yes I do like capturing different views of for example the landscape paintings and especially sunset in the window of my condo because when I photographing different views which I really like, it helps me calm it also.

✓ Yes, I do like capturing different views, for example landscapes and especially sunsets seen from the window of my condo, because when I photograph different views that I really like, it helps calm me.

Error: incorrect verb form 'photographing' used without proper structure and awkward word order. The clause should use the base form 'photograph' after 'when I' to form a correct present simple time clause. Also improve noun forms ('landscape paintings' -> 'landscapes'; 'sunset' -> plural 'sunsets') and word order ('calm it also' -> 'calm me'). Suggestion: use 'when I photograph' for habitual actions and place the object and modifiers in a natural order.

× I prefer both because right now I am here in an urban area since I am taking my nursing class or my pre Med course and at the same time my hometown is in the rural area so both of it has its own way.

✓ I prefer both because right now I am in an urban area for my nursing class or pre-med course, and at the same time my hometown is in a rural area, so both of them have their own advantages.

Errors: incorrect pronoun 'it' for 'both' and article use 'the rural area'. 'Both' refers to two things and requires 'them' and a plural verb 'have'. Also 'pre Med' should be 'pre-med' and 'in an urban area' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'both of them have' and 'advantages' to convey meaning clearly.

× To be honest I do like the views from another country compared to my own country because when I see photos from online about the foreign countries like their sunset, their beach views and their buildings especially their how they are technology wise which I do like and I want.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views from other countries to those in my own country because when I see photos online of foreign countries—their sunsets, beaches, and buildings, especially their technological developments—I like them and I want to visit.

Errors: incorrect prepositions 'from online' should be 'online' or 'on the internet'; 'from another country compared to my own country' is wordy—use 'from other countries to those in my own country'. Also awkward phrase 'their how they are technology wise' is ungrammatical; replace with 'their technological developments' or 'their technology'. Suggestion: simplify comparisons with 'prefer X to Y' and use 'online' for photos source, and clarify the final clause 'I want to visit' or 'I want to see them'.