Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and clarify unclear phrases (e.g. “UMM,” “Taking photo skills with”). Aim for 2–4 sentences, and use varied vocabulary like “capture,” “landscapes,” or “scenery.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. It helps me relax after a long day at work, and I also like practising my photography skills to capture light and composition. For example, I often photograph sunsets in the park to improve my timing and framing.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence in present tense and follow with specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar (e.g. ‘preferred’ → ‘prefer’) and avoid filler words (‘UH’, ‘Moreover’ without continuation). Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’ to connect ideas. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer countryside views to urban scenes because I enjoy photographing natural landscapes like mountains, lakes and the sea. These locations help me relax and offer varied subjects, for example I often hike to a mountain viewpoint to capture sunrise colours.

Gợi ý: Be specific and clear: state preference directly, give concrete reasons and an example. Remove hesitations (‘Umm’) and correct phrasing (‘in my country’). Provide one or two specific place names correctly and explain why those places appeal to you. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example.’

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Thailand offers a wide range of landscapes close to home. For example, places like Chiang Rai and Lampang have mountains and scenic viewpoints where I can practice landscape photography and relax.

× Taking a picture of different views can be an effective way to help me reduce stress after a long day at work.

✓ Taking pictures of different views can be an effective way to help me reduce stress after a long day at work.

The original sentence uses 'a picture' which is singular but refers to the general activity of photography. Use the plural 'pictures' to match the general habit. This is a singular and plural issue (use plural to indicate repeated or general action). Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to activities done repeatedly or generally.

× Moreover, it help me to improve my UMM.

✓ Moreover, it helps me to improve my UMM.

The subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb form 'helps'. The original 'help' is incorrect for third-person singular. Use 'helps' to agree with 'it'.

× Taking photo skills with.

✓ It also improves my photography skills.

The original fragment 'Taking photo skills with.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Recast the idea as a full sentence: 'It also improves my photography skills.' This provides a clear subject and verb and correct noun phrase 'photography skills'.

× Personally, I preferred UH countryside views because I love taking landscapes such as mountain, sea and lake, which makes me feel more relaxed and refreshed after a long day at work.

✓ Personally, I prefer countryside views because I love taking landscape photos of mountains, the sea, and lakes, which make me feel more relaxed and refreshed after a long day at work.

The original uses past tense 'preferred' but the context expresses a general preference, so present tense 'prefer' is correct (present tense issue). Also noun number and articles were incorrect: use 'landscape photos' and plural nouns 'mountains' and 'lakes'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'which make me' matches plural 'mountains, the sea, and lakes.' Suggestions: use present tense for habitual preferences and plural nouns for categories.

× Moreover.

✓ Moreover, I find that rural scenery helps me relax even more.

The single word 'Moreover.' is a fragment and does not complete the thought. Provide a full clause to add additional supporting information.

× In my opinion, I prefer Umm wills in my countries because in Thailand there are availability of landscapes such as mountainous areas, umm for example Xin Lai and Lampang taking.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer views in my country because Thailand has many landscapes, such as mountainous areas; for example, Chiang Rai and Lampang.

The original contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and nouns ('Umm wills', 'my countries') and word order. Use 'views in my country' for a single country reference. Replace 'there are availability of landscapes' with 'Thailand has many landscapes.' Correct place names and word order. Also remove filler 'taking' and 'umm'. Suggestions: speak clearly, use correct place names (Chiang Rai), and use 'has' to show possession of features.