Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking phrase. Avoid repetition (e.g., "taking pictures" repeated) and keep to at most 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I love capturing moments because photos let me relive special experiences later; for instance, a sunset picture can bring back the feelings I had at that moment. This also helps me build a personal gallery of memories.

Gợi ý: Good content and structure; improve coherence by using clear linking words and slightly more precise vocabulary. Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'have a fresh air' -> 'get some fresh air'). Limit to 3–4 sentences and add one specific example or contrast with urban views.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy being close to nature and wide landscapes. For example, when I'm stressed from work, I often visit nearby hills to relax and get some fresh air, which I find much more restorative than a city park.

Gợi ý: Good personal connection and specific reference to Nepal. Improve sentence flow by using linking words and correct minor punctuation (e.g., add commas). Expand slightly with one specific example and avoid vague phrases like 'I can visit easily'—explain why. Keep it within 4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because the nearby mountains and waterfalls are both accessible and inspiring. For example, the Himalayan vistas near my hometown never fail to amaze me and make me feel connected to my culture. Although I appreciate landscapes abroad, I usually choose local trips because they are easier to plan and visit.

× Uh, living in the moment, taking pictures, creating memories through my gallery is something that I love the most.

✓ Uh, living in the moment, taking pictures, and creating memories through my gallery are things that I love the most.

The original sentence lists three gerund phrases connected as a compound subject but then uses singular 'is' with 'something.' This causes number mismatch between compound subject and verb. Use plural verb 'are' and plural noun 'things', and add 'and' for proper coordination. Suggestion: Ensure compound subjects linked by 'and' take a plural verb; match 'things' with 'are'.

× I like taking pictures because after sometimes we can go back and relive the moment.

✓ I like taking pictures because later we can go back and relive the moments.

Word order and word choice are off: 'after sometimes' is nonstandard. Use 'later' or 'sometimes later'. Also 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match the general idea. Suggestion: use natural adverb placement (e.g., 'later' after the clause subject) and pluralize when referring generally.

× I prefer rural areas rather than urban areas because I like to connect myself with nature.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I like to connect with nature.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A rather than B' for comparative preference. Also 'connect myself with nature' is awkward; native usage is 'connect with nature' without reflexive pronoun. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and avoid unnecessary reflexive pronouns.

× In rural areas, I can see hills, landscapes and all the nature around.

✓ In rural areas, I can see hills, landscapes, and all the natural surroundings.

'All the nature around' is unidiomatic; 'nature' is an uncountable noun and should be described as 'natural surroundings' or 'nature around me.' Also missing comma before final item in list for clarity. Suggestion: use 'natural surroundings' or 'the nature around me' for clearer expression.

× For example, if I'm having a busy schedule and I need a break, I would rather go to rural areas and spend my time there to have a fresh air.

✓ For example, if I have a busy schedule and need a break, I would rather go to rural areas and spend my time there to get some fresh air.

Mix of tenses and article use: 'If I'm having' is acceptable but 'if I have' is more natural for habitual situations. 'Have a fresh air' is incorrect; 'have fresh air' is uncommon—use 'get some fresh air.' Also 'spend my time there to get some fresh air' sounds more natural. Suggestion: use 'get some fresh air' and keep conditional tense consistent.

× I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because it has many fascinating mountains, hills, waterfalls I can visit easily.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because it has many fascinating mountains, hills, and waterfalls I can visit easily.

Missing comma before 'and' in the list and missing comma after 'waterfalls' would improve clarity; more importantly, the list needs a coordinating conjunction 'and' before the final item. Suggestion: include 'and' in lists and commas to separate items clearly.

× Although other countries have impressive landscape, I feel more connected to my own.

✓ Although other countries have impressive landscapes, I feel more connected to my own.

'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' when referring generally to multiple places. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally about many features.