Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حسّن الدقة النحوية واستخدم جملًا أكثر سلاسة وطبيعية. تجنّب الأخطاء في تصريف الأفعال (مثل "photographing" و"take") واستخدم روابط بسيطة لتوضيح السبب أو النتيجة. حافظ على طول الجواب لا يتجاوز 4-5 جمل واذكر أمثلة محددة أكثر بدلاً من عبارات عامة.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I always take my camera with me, especially when I travel, because I enjoy capturing local markets and street scenes. For example, last year I photographed colourful market stalls in Marrakech to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: ركّز على بناء جملة موضوعية واضحة وقلّل الترددات (مثل "uh"). صحّح الأخطاء في استخدام الأسماء والضمائر (مثل "view" يجب أن تكون "views" و"in this areas" يجب أن تكون "in these areas"). قدّم سببين محددين مدعومين بأمثلة قصيرة لزيادة الوضوح والتماسك.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more scenic. For instance, I enjoy photographing green fields and small villages, while cities usually have heavy traffic and crowded streets, which I find distracting.

Gợi ý: تجنّب التكرار واصغِ الجمل بشكل طبيعي. صحّح العبارات غير الطبيعية مثل "in worldwide" و"in the other" إلى "around the world" و"in other countries". قدّم مقارنة بسيطة ومحددة لتوضيح تفضيلك بدلاً من تكرار نفس الفكرة عدة مرات.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both in my country and around the world because each place offers different scenery. However, I especially prefer rural landscapes whether at home or abroad—for example, I love photographing coastal villages in my country and mountain hamlets when I travel.

× I like to photographing things and take my camera with me everywhere.

✓ I like photographing things and taking my camera with me everywhere.

The verb pattern is incorrect: after 'like' use the gerund 'photographing' not 'to photographing', and parallel verbs should match ('photographing' and 'taking'). Use gerunds for activities you enjoy and make verbs parallel.

× I prefer view in rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas.

Count noun 'view' should be plural when speaking generally about types of views. Use the plural 'views' for general preference.

× I feel comfortable when I see views in this areas and it's more beautiful than the urban areas.

✓ I feel comfortable when I see views in these areas and they're more beautiful than urban areas.

Incorrect demonstrative 'this' with plural noun; use 'these'. Also 'it's' (it is) is wrong for plural subject; use 'they're' or rephrase. Omit 'the' before 'urban areas' for general comparison.

× The city is, uh, had, uh, traffic and many cars and various people who.

✓ The city has traffic, many cars, and lots of people.

Sentence structure is broken and contains filler words. Use present simple 'has' to describe features. Remove 'who' or complete the clause ('who...') if adding relative information.

× I love all the views in worldwide, in my country and in the other countries.

✓ I love all the views worldwide, in my country and in other countries.

Incorrect prepositional phrase 'in worldwide' — 'worldwide' is an adverb/ adjective that doesn't need 'in'. Use 'in other countries' not 'in the other countries' for general statement.

× I prefer the rural areas in my country and in the other.

✓ I prefer the rural areas in my country and in other countries.

Inconsistency with 'the other' — use 'other countries' plural for clarity. Also ensure parallel structure: 'in my country and in other countries.'

× I feel it comfortable.

✓ I feel comfortable.

Unnecessary pronoun 'it' makes the sentence ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'comfortable' with 'feel' directly: 'I feel comfortable.'