Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct simple grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and wrong words like 'senses' or missing plurals.

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me remember places and relax. For example, I often photograph seaside landscapes and coastal sunsets when I visit the beach because the light and colours change a lot and make each scene memorable.

Gợi ý: Good structure and clear reasons. Improve by adding a linking word and one more specific detail or short comparison to rural views. Also avoid vague place names (e.g., 'Riverside' without article) and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city skyline and the contrast between modern and historic buildings. For example, I like walking along the riverfront at night and watching the city lights, which feel lively, whereas rural views are quieter and more peaceful.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary mistakes and awkward phrases; be direct. Use a topic sentence, then give a clear specific reason and example. Replace incorrect words like 'wheels' and 'currency' with 'views' and 'country'. Reduce filler words such as 'Umm'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the places I grew up in and understand the local culture. For example, I love photographing our nearby coastal landscapes and historic towns because they remind me of childhood visits and local traditions.

× Yes I do, I enjoy taking picture of different views because scenery and landscapes help me remember place and visit and photography is a relaxing hobby.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because scenery and landscapes help me remember places I have visited, and photography is a relaxing hobby.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally about taking photos (singular/plural issue - ID 1). 'remember place and visit' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is to remember places I have visited (sentence structure and verb tense). Also punctuation and conjunctions were adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities (take pictures), use 'places I have visited' to indicate past experiences remembered, and separate clauses with appropriate punctuation.

× Umm for example, I often photograph senses and the beach.

✓ Umm, for example, I often photograph scenes and the beach.

The word 'senses' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'scenes' (use of correct word form/adjective-noun — fits under incorrect use of adjectives or nouns but mapped to article/word choice - ID 17). Suggestion: use 'scenes' when referring to visual views or settings. Also add commas for natural speech pauses.

× I prefer the wheels in my own currency because I feel more connected to the place I grew up in and they have a unique culture atmosphere that I understand.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I feel more connected to the place I grew up in, and it has a unique cultural atmosphere that I understand.

Multiple errors: 'wheels' and 'currency' are incorrect words for 'views' and 'country' (wrong word choice; treated as incorrect pronoun/noun usage - ID 11). 'They have' is incorrect because 'the place' is singular; use 'it has' (pronoun agreement - ID 12). 'culture atmosphere' should be 'cultural atmosphere' (adjective form error - ID 13). Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('views','country'), ensure subject-pronoun agreement, and use adjective form 'cultural' to modify 'atmosphere'.

× For example, I love our coastal landscapes and historic towns nearby.

✓ For example, I love our coastal landscapes and the nearby historic towns.

The sentence is largely correct but 'nearby' more naturally modifies 'historic towns' as 'nearby historic towns' or place 'the nearby historic towns'. This is an order/clarity suggestion (singular/plural and adjective order - ID 1). Suggestion: place modifiers before the noun they modify or include definite article for specificity.