Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Améliorez la fluidité et la précision en éliminant les hésitations (um/uh), en organisant la réponse en une phrase principale claire puis une ou deux phrases de détail, et en évitant les répétitions. Donnez des exemples concrets (lieu, moment, sujet de la photo) et utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views, especially historical monuments and lively public events. For example, last year in Hawaii I photographed a traditional festival at sunset, capturing people in costume and the dramatic colors of the sky, which made the images very memorable.

Gợi ý: Clarifiez votre préférence avec une phrase d'introduction nette, puis comparez brièvement en utilisant des mots de liaison (however, whereas) et des détails spécifiques. Évitez les phrases inachevées et les répétitions, et utilisez un vocabulaire précis pour décrire les vues urbaines (skyline, architecture) et rurales (meadows, forests).

Ví dụ: I enjoy both, but if I had to choose I prefer rural views because of the greenery and peaceful landscapes that help me connect with nature. However, urban views are also appealing for their dramatic skylines and interesting architecture, which give me great opportunities for contrast shots.

Gợi ý: Répondez directement en donnant une préférence claire ou en disant que les deux vous plaisent, puis expliquez pourquoi avec un exemple précis. Évitez les hésitations et les généralisations vagues; dites quel aspect culturel ou historique vous attire et donnez un contraste concis avec l'étranger.

Ví dụ: I appreciate views in my own country because they reflect local history and culture, such as the colonial buildings in Boston that tell stories about the past. At the same time, I enjoy visiting other countries to discover different architectural styles and cultural scenes, which broaden my photographic perspective.

× I enjoy taking pictures, especially when I witness some uh breathtaking scenarios like UH history, historical monuments or some special events like the French French UH national holiday.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures, especially when I see breathtaking scenes such as historical monuments or special events like the French national holiday.

'Witness' is typically used for observing events or occurrences, but in this context 'see' or 'visit' is more natural; this is not strictly a present participle error, but the phrase 'breathtaking scenarios' is awkward — 'breathtaking scenes' is idiomatic. Also repeated 'French' should be removed. Use of 'such as' is clearer than 'like' before examples. These edits improve natural collocation and clarity.

× For example, last year when I was traveling in the Hawaii I I did love.

✓ For example, last year when I was traveling in Hawaii, I really loved it.

Use of article 'the' before 'Hawaii' is incorrect; most proper nouns for islands/states do not need 'the'. The phrase 'I I did love' is ungrammatical and repetitive — replace with simple past 'I really loved it' to match past-time reference.

× I say I like most of them.

✓ I would say I like most of them.

The original is conversational but incomplete. Adding 'would' makes the phrasing more natural. There is no plural error per se, but the sentence benefit from modal 'would' for preference statements.

× For example, in the rural area there are views with more greenery and which can help me have a good connection with nature.

✓ For example, in rural areas there are more green views that help me feel a good connection with nature.

'In the rural area' should be plural 'in rural areas' for general statements. 'Views with more greenery and which can help me have a good connection' is a run-on relative clause. Rephrase to 'more green views that help me feel a good connection with nature' for clarity and correct relative clause structure.

× However, in the city and there are also some special specialties like the sky three, uh.

✓ However, in the city there are also special features like skyscrapers.

'And there are also some special specialties' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'Specialties' is the wrong word; 'features' or 'attractions' fits better. 'Sky three' is a mispronunciation of 'skyscrapers'. Remove filler 'uh' and correct to 'skyscrapers'.

× Well, I say, uh, I like Boston because, umm, the views in my country reflect the local history and cultures and I, I enjoy this kind of thing and uh, however, the views in other countries can review different cultures and history.

✓ Well, I would say I like Boston because the views there reflect local history and culture, and I enjoy that; however, the views in other countries can reveal different cultures and histories.

Multiple issues: 'I say' is better as 'I would say' for spoken preference. 'The views in my country reflect the local history and cultures' — 'cultures' is awkward; 'culture' (uncountable) is appropriate, but 'histories' plural is acceptable for different countries. 'Can review' is wrong; use 'can reveal' or 'show'. Remove repeated fillers and duplicated 'I'. Reorganize sentence to avoid comma splices and improve parallelism.