Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms and clearer nouns, avoid redundancy, and organize into 2–3 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples using linking words. Also correct awkward phrases (e.g., 'store our baby food').

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures because I'm a photographer. When I travel, I usually photograph landscapes, local people and street scenes, and then I post my best shots on Instagram or TikTok.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure, verb tenses and vocabulary precision. Give a clear preference or explain the conditions using linking words ('if', 'while', 'however'). Avoid repetition and incorrect articles. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends on where I am. If I travel to a city, I enjoy photographing industrial scenes and street architecture, while in the countryside I prefer shooting mountains and natural landscapes.

Gợi ý: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar: use proper tense and vocabulary ('born and raised', 'more novel'). Provide a concise reason and avoid repetitions. Use linking words such as 'because' to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I was born and raised here, so foreign scenery feels more novel and exciting to me.

× For example when I'm travelling I taking picture about the environment, people store our baby food and I posting on my Instagram or probably on my Tiktok.

✓ For example, when I'm travelling I take pictures of the environment, people, stores and our baby food, and I post them on my Instagram or maybe on my TikTok.

The student used incorrect -ing forms ('taking', 'posting') where the simple present is required to describe habitual actions. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the plural objects, and prepositions were incorrect ('about' -> 'of'). Use simple present for regular activities: 'I take pictures' and 'I post them'.

× It depends when I'm traveling. If I traveling on urban areas so I like to taking the industrial industrial but if I travelling in a rural areas I will taking a mountain.

✓ It depends when I'm traveling. If I'm traveling in urban areas, I like to take industrial views, but if I travel to rural areas I will take pictures of mountains.

Multiple present tense errors: missing auxiliary 'am' in conditional clause ('If I traveling' -> 'If I'm traveling' or 'If I travel'), inconsistent verb forms ('like to taking' -> 'like to take'), and wrong use of articles and plural forms ('industrial industrial' unclear; corrected to 'industrial views'). 'Traveling on urban areas' -> 'traveling in urban areas', and 'will taking' -> 'will take'. Use correct present simple or present continuous forms depending on context, and ensure verbs agree with auxiliaries.

× If I traveling on urban areas so I like to taking the industrial industrial but if I travelling in a rural areas I will taking a mountain.

✓ If I'm traveling in urban areas, I like to take industrial views, but if I travel to rural areas I will take pictures of mountains.

Prepositions were incorrect: 'on urban areas' should be 'in urban areas'; 'in a rural areas' should be 'in rural areas' or 'to rural areas'; 'taking a mountain' is incorrect—use 'take pictures of mountains'. Choose prepositions that match the noun (in/ to) and use 'of' when indicating what pictures depict.

× If I traveling on urban areas so I like to taking the industrial industrial but if I travelling in a rural areas I will taking a mountain.

✓ If I'm traveling in urban areas, I like to take industrial views, but if I travel to rural areas I will take pictures of mountains.

There were noun number errors: 'urban areas' (plural) should match plural objects 'views' rather than singular 'the industrial industrial' or 'a mountain'. Use plural nouns when speaking generally (mountains, views, pictures).

× I posting on my Instagram or probably on my Tiktok.

✓ I post on my Instagram or maybe on my TikTok.

The verb 'post' for first person should be in the base form for habitual actions ('I post'), not 'posting'. This is not a third person issue but the error type list includes third person singular; however the correction uses simple present 'I post' to indicate regular activity.

× For example when I'm travelling I taking picture about the environment, people store our baby food and I posting on my Instagram or probably on my Tiktok.

✓ For example, when I'm travelling I take pictures of the environment, people, stores and our baby food, and I post them on my Instagram or maybe on my TikTok.

Pronoun/reference issue: the student listed items without clear separators and later said 'I posting' without an object. Adding 'them' clarifies that the pictures are what is being posted. Also punctuation and list separators improve clarity.

× I prefer fuse in other country because I born and live here in my my in my own country.

✓ I prefer photos from other countries because I was born and live here in my own country.

The original sentence has unclear structure ('I prefer fuse', repeated words 'my my', and incorrect tense 'I born'). Rephrase to 'I prefer photos from other countries because I was born and live here' for clear meaning. Use past tense 'was born' for birth and present 'live' for current residence.

× I prefer fuse in other country because I born and live here in my my in my own country.

✓ I prefer photos from other countries because I was born and live here in my own country.

The verb 'born' requires the past participle form with auxiliary: 'I was born'. Use simple past/passive for birth event and present tense for current state 'live'.

× So I prefer feels in other countries because I can I can feel that I never seen before.

✓ So I prefer being in other countries because I can experience things I have never seen before.

The student used 'feels' incorrectly as a noun and repeated 'I can'. Better to use 'being' or 'visiting' and 'experience'. Also use present perfect 'I have never seen before' to indicate life experience up to now.

× So I prefer feels in other countries because I can I can feel that I never seen before.

✓ So I prefer being in other countries because I can experience things I have never seen before.

The present participle 'feels' is misused. Use 'being' or 'visiting' (present participle) correctly to indicate preference for the state of being in other countries. Also correct the tense ('have never seen').