Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지만 문법 오류와 불완전한 문장이 있습니다. 답변은 직접적으로 질문에 응답한 뒤 구체적인 상세를 2~3문장으로 덧붙이는 것이 좋습니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장의 흐름을 매끄럽게 하고, ‘lighting’에 대해 무엇을 실험하는지(예: 각도, 시간대, 노출 등)를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 문장 끝을 완결형으로 만들어야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing a variety of scenes, such as buildings and interior spaces. For example, I like to experiment with different lighting conditions, like shooting at golden hour or adjusting exposure to create mood. This helps me capture unique atmospheres in my photos.

Gợi ý: 의견은 분명하지만 문장이 중복되고 문법 오류(예: 'in countryside', 문장 미완성)가 있습니다. 주제문을 명확히 한 뒤 이유를 두세 가지로 구체적으로 제시하세요. 연결어(to add, moreover 등)를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하고 문장을 완결형으로 만드세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer countryside views because they have abundant natural scenery and open spaces. For instance, there are wide fields and fewer buildings, so I can compose wider shots and use natural light more effectively. Moreover, the peaceful atmosphere helps me focus on framing my pictures.

Gợi ý: 의견 전달은 되었지만 표현이 어색하고 중복, 문법 오류가 있습니다(예: 'few', 'their building', 비교 구조 불명확). 구체적인 비교 포인트(건축 양식, 공간감, 보존 상태 등)를 제시하고, 비교 표현을 정확하게 사용하세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 간결하게 마무리하세요.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe. For example, European cities often feature historic architecture and spacious plazas, which offer more interesting compositions than the denser urban areas I see in Korea. This variety inspires my photography.

× I enjoy taking different views like taking pictures or buildings indoors and outdoors.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views, such as buildings indoors and outdoors.

Original sentence misuses 'like' and repeats 'taking' awkwardly; also 'views like taking pictures or buildings' is ungrammatical. Use 'enjoy taking pictures of different views' and 'such as' to list examples. This fixes verb phrase structure and clarifies the object of 'taking'. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures of' + noun phrase and 'such as' to introduce examples.

× I like to experiment with many lighting and.

✓ I like to experiment with different lighting.

Sentence ends abruptly with 'and' and uses 'many lighting' which is uncountable; use 'different lighting' or 'various lighting setups'. Suggestion: Use uncountable noun forms correctly and avoid sentence fragments.

× I prefer countryside views because in countryside they usually have so much nature, which I like and it's more spacious and.

✓ I prefer countryside views because the countryside usually has so much nature, which I like, and it is more spacious.

Original misuses 'in countryside' and 'they have' for 'countryside'; 'countryside' needs 'the' and is singular, so use 'has' not 'have'. Also sentence ends with 'and.' Fix article and subject-verb agreement and remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: Use 'the countryside' and match verb to singular noun.

× I can feel more light.

✓ I can feel more space and natural light.

Alone, 'I can feel more light' is odd; likely intended 'I can feel more light/space'; improve clarity by adding 'space and natural light'. Suggestion: Combine related ideas for clarity and natural phrasing.

× I prefer other countries, few.

✓ I prefer other countries, a few of them.

'few' after a clause is mispositioned and unclear. Use 'a few' to indicate some other countries or rephrase 'I prefer some other countries.' Suggestion: Place quantifiers properly and use 'a few' when meaning 'some.'

× For example, I like views of Europe because usually in Europe their building is so much nicer and in Korea, compared to Korea it's more spacious.

✓ For example, I like views in Europe because European buildings are usually much nicer, and compared to Korea, Europe is more spacious.

Original uses 'their building' which is vague and ungrammatical; 'their' doesn't clearly refer to Europe. Use 'European buildings' and correct word order 'compared to Korea, Europe is more spacious.' Also remove redundant 'in Europe' placement. Suggestion: Use appropriate noun forms (European buildings) and clear comparative phrasing.