Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct word choices, and give specific examples. Use linking words to join ideas (for example, "for example", "also"). Reduce filler words and ensure sentences are natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes when I travel and candid shots when I’m hiking with friends. I like keeping these pictures because they help me remember moments and feel nostalgic when I look back.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence, correct grammar and word forms, remove hesitations, and use linking words to organize reasons (for example, "firstly", "also"). Give specific details or a short example of activities. Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because of the lush greenery and the presence of farm animals like goats and cows. Also, rural areas generally have less pollution, so I enjoy breathing fresher air. For instance, I like walking along country trails and watching local farming activities.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, accurate comparison with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid incorrect or unclear words (e.g., "suspicious" is inappropriate). Use linking words for comparison (for example, "compared to", "whereas"). Provide one specific contrast and a short reason. Keep it natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I grew up in India but now live in Canada, so I can compare both. Compared to India, the Canadian countryside is much greener and less polluted, whereas rural areas in India often have smaller, more cultivated fields. For that reason, I prefer the peaceful scenery in Canada.

× Yes, I love taking picture of different views whenever I whenever I go.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views whenever I go.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the speaker refers to taking multiple photos generally. Use plural nouns when talking about things in general or multiple instances. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when referring to more than one photo.

× I often take photos when I am traveling, when I am cooking or when I am hiking out.

✓ I often take photos when I am traveling, when I am cooking, or when I am hiking.

The phrase 'hiking out' is unnatural; 'hiking' (present participle) is sufficient to express the activity. Also add a comma before 'or' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'hiking' without 'out' for general activity descriptions.

× I love to take pictures with my friends because I want to preserve memories so that I can watch these letters and have feel nostalgic.

✓ I love to take pictures with my friends because I want to preserve memories so that I can look at these photos and feel nostalgic.

The word 'letters' is the wrong noun; 'photos' or 'pictures' should be used. Also 'have feel nostalgic' is ungrammatical; use 'feel nostalgic'. Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('photos') and correct verb phrase ('feel nostalgic').

× In my opinion, I prefer the views of rural area over the urban area because I love the lush greenery and different kinds of animals like goat and cows.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer the views of rural areas over urban areas because I love the lush greenery and different kinds of animals like goats and cows.

Use plural 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' when speaking generally. Also 'goat and cows' should be 'goats and cows' (plural) and no article needed before plural nouns in general statements. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general comparisons and plural nouns for animals.

× And in spite of this, uh, in the rural life area, there is a less pollution and I can, I love to breathe in less polluted areas and there are different kind of activities I can do.

✓ In rural areas, there is less pollution, and I love to breathe cleaner air; there are also different kinds of activities I can do.

Use 'less pollution' without 'a' and 'rural areas' instead of 'rural life area'. 'Different kind' should be 'different kinds'. Also 'breathe in less polluted areas' is awkward; 'breathe cleaner air' is clearer. Suggestion: Simplify and use correct quantifier/phrase forms ('less pollution', 'different kinds').

× I am originally from India, but I currently live in Canada so I can compare the rural areas in both countries.

✓ I am originally from India, but I currently live in Canada, so I can compare the rural areas of both countries.

Use the preposition 'of' to indicate possession or belonging for 'rural areas of both countries' rather than 'in'. Also add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use 'of' for comparison of areas belonging to countries.

× The countryside in Canada is much greener, less polluted and more suspicious than spacious than in India where villager fields often crafted.

✓ The countryside in Canada is much greener and less polluted, and more spacious than in India, where village fields are often cultivated.

Multiple errors: 'more suspicious than spacious' is incorrect word choice—should be 'more spacious'. 'Villager fields often crafted' is ungrammatical; use 'village fields are often cultivated'. Also restore parallel structure using 'and' between adjectives. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives ('spacious'), correct passive/verb forms ('are cultivated'), and keep parallel adjective structure.

× I also prefer the peaceful scenery here.

✓ I also prefer the peaceful scenery here.

This sentence is grammatically correct but kept for completeness. No change needed. Suggestion: None.