Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法と語彙の誤り、冗長表現、最後の不明瞭な文（"Capturing how?"）が減点対象です。改善点は次の通りです：1) トピック文を明確にし、2) 不要な重複を避け、3) 文法（時制・語形）を正しくし、4) 自然な接続詞で詳細を繋ぐこと。たとえば「I like taking pictures of portraits, landscapes and food. Above all, I enjoy photographing food because I like trying new dishes. For example, I focus on the colors and textures to make the photos appealing.」のように5文以内でまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like taking pictures of portraits, landscapes and food. Above all, I enjoy photographing food because I love trying new dishes. Also, I pay attention to colors and textures to make the photos look more appealing. For example, when I photograph a dish, I arrange the plate and use natural light to highlight its details.

Gợi ý: 回答は趣旨を満たしていますが、語彙の選択と文法（"builds"→"buildings"、"rural area"の冠詞など）に注意が必要です。また、接続詞で意見と理由を滑らかに繋げると良いです。より具体的な描写や一つの具体例を加えると説得力が増します。改善例：トピック文で好みを述べ、次に理由と具体例を一つ加え、最後にまとめる構成にしてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers more natural scenery and open space. For instance, I enjoy looking at rolling hills and distant mountains, which feel much more peaceful than crowded city buildings. Therefore, I often go to the countryside to relax and take photos.

Gợi ý: 回答は繰り返しが多く、意味が不明確な表現（"Either you"、"singly"）が見られます。質問は国の比較なので、まず自国か外国か明確に述べ、次に理由と具体的な違いを示してください。語彙は正確な単語（"either"の誤用を避ける、"simply"など）を選び、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。例："I prefer views in other countries because..." という形で始めると良いです。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and cultural scenery I can't find at home. For example, I once visited the Alps and enjoyed vast mountain panoramas that felt very different from the fields and hills in my country. As a result, traveling abroad helps me discover new kinds of scenery and perspectives.

× But above all, I especially enjoy photographing food because I'm fond of trying different dishes and captures.

✓ But above all, I especially enjoy photographing food because I'm fond of trying different dishes and capturing them.

The verb 'captures' is incorrectly used as a noun here; it should be the gerund 'capturing' to match 'trying different dishes and capturing them' (parallel structure). Also add 'them' to clarify the object. Improve parallelism by using two gerunds: 'trying' and 'capturing'. Suggested improvement: use parallel gerunds for linked actions and include clear objects.

× Capturing how?

✓ How do you capture them?

This fragment lacks a proper verb structure for a question. Use 'How do you capture them?' to form a complete question in present simple. It clarifies the subject and action. Suggested improvement: form full interrogative sentences with auxiliary verbs when needed.

× I prefer builds in rural area because the countryside has much more natural scenery and open space.

✓ I prefer buildings in rural areas because the countryside has much more natural scenery and open space.

'Builds' is not a correct plural noun; use 'buildings'. 'Rural area' should be pluralized to 'rural areas' to match general preference. Also 'the countryside' is fine. Ensure correct noun forms and pluralization. Suggested improvement: use standard nouns and match singular/plural for general statements.

× I especially enjoy looking at views and mountains, which makes me feel more peaceful than the busy city buildings.

✓ I especially enjoy looking at fields and mountains, which make me feel more peaceful than busy city buildings.

Changed 'views' to 'fields' to match later repeated idea; 'which make' should agree with plural subject 'fields and mountains' (subject-verb agreement). Remove 'the' before 'busy city buildings' to make it general. Ensure verb agrees with plural subjects. Suggested improvement: ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent article use for general comparisons.

× Either you because the countryside has much more natural, singly and open space than city.

✓ Either is fine because the countryside has much more natural, simple, and open space than the city.

Original 'Either you' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'Either is fine' fits the question 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' Also 'singly' is wrong word; likely 'simple' intended. Added commas and 'the' before 'city' for clarity and comparison. Suggested improvement: choose the correct phrase 'Either is fine' for choice questions and use appropriate adjectives.

× I especially enjoy looking at fields and mountains, which makes me feel more peaceful than busy cities.

✓ I especially enjoy looking at fields and mountains, which make me feel more peaceful than busy cities.

'Which makes' is incorrect because 'fields and mountains' is plural; the relative clause verb must be 'make'. Ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses. Suggested improvement: match verb number to the relative clause antecedent.