Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like to taking the pictures, umm, for me when I child, I take pictures to other plants using my camera. It's very, very interesting thing.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like the overview because I live in the city. City are the building, the high building and the wide sky, the car, the light is very, very beautiful and it's very.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
MMM I prefer the views in my country because my country is very beautiful. It has a high mountain, a white sky and some high building. I love my home hometown, It's very important for my life.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更语法正确并更自然,避免口头语和重复。可用一到两句主题句直接回答,然后补充一两个具体细节(什么时候开始、拍什么、感觉如何)。注意时态和名词复数/冠词的使用,例如:"When I was a child"、"take pictures of plants"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I started when I was a child, and I often photograph plants and flowers close to my home because I find their shapes and colors very interesting.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并使用连贯的连接词,避免句子残缺和重复。先给出明确偏好(urban或rural),然后用1–2个具体理由支持,比如建筑、夜景或安静的环境,使用正确的名词单复数和形容词比较结构。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I live in the city. The tall buildings, busy streets and colorful lights create an exciting atmosphere, and I especially enjoy photographing skylines at sunset.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并避免模糊表达。先明确偏好,再用具体的例子说明(比如某座山、城市或特色景观),并表达原因或情感时可更简练自然。注意形容词搭配("white sky"不常用,可改为"clear sky"或"snow-capped mountains")。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes I love. For example, there are high, forested mountains and clear blue skies near my hometown, and those familiar scenes make me feel connected and proud.
× Yeah, I like to taking the pictures, umm, for me when I child, I take pictures to other plants using my camera. It's very, very interesting thing.
✓ Yeah, I like taking pictures. When I was a child, I used to take pictures of plants with my camera. It's a very, very interesting thing.
句子中“like to taking”混合了不定式和动名词的形式,应使用“like + -ing”或“like to + base verb”之一,常用“like taking”。此外“when I child”缺主语+be动词时态,正确为“When I was a child”。“take pictures to other plants”中介词错误,应为“take pictures of plants”(拍……的照片)。“using my camera”更自然地改为“with my camera”。整体也将句子拆分为更自然的短句。建议多记忆常见动词后面接动名词或不定式的搭配,并注意固定介词搭配。
× I like the overview because I live in the city. City are the building, the high building and the wide sky, the car, the light is very, very beautiful and it's very.
✓ I like the view because I live in the city. The city has buildings, tall buildings, a wide sky, cars, and lights. It is very, very beautiful.
原句中“City are the building”主谓不一致且名词单复数混用。应使用“the city has ...”来表达某地拥有什么。将“building”改为复数“buildings”,并用“tall buildings”表达“高楼”。“the car, the light is”也存在主谓不一致,应分别为“cars, and lights”。句子结尾“and it's very.”不完整,改为“It is very, very beautiful.” 建议熟悉主谓一致规则并用完整句子表达列举信息。
× MMM I prefer the views in my country because my country is very beautiful. It has a high mountain, a white sky and some high building. I love my home hometown, It's very important for my life.
✓ I prefer the views in my country because my country is very beautiful. It has high mountains, a white sky, and some tall buildings. I love my hometown; it is very important to my life.
“a high mountain”若泛指应改为复数“high mountains”以符合上下文。“some high building”中“building”应为复数“buildings”,并且形容词位置正确但“tall buildings”更自然。重复使用“home hometown”多余,应为“hometown”或“my home”。另外“It’s very important for my life”更自然的表达是“important to my life”。建议注意可数名词单复数用法及常见搭配(important to),避免冗余词。