Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and include one clear reason plus a brief example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use a topic sentence, then one or two supporting details linked with a connector (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to preserve memories. For example, when I go out with my family or friends I often photograph landscapes and candid moments so I can look back on them later.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear choice, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct word forms and avoid vague phrases. Mention concrete details (e.g., 'fields, trees, traditional buildings') and connect them logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy wide fields and traditional village scenery. For instance, I like seeing green rice paddies, old granaries and clusters of trees, which feel peaceful compared with the busy city.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and clear reasons with correct grammar. Specify what about the seasons you like and give a short specific example. Avoid incorrect phrases and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because Pakistan has four distinct seasons that create varied landscapes. For example, in spring and winter many areas are lush and green, while autumn brings colorful foliage and summer shows warm, clear skies.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of the different views because actually I am I am a memory creator so I like to I like to save my memories.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I am a memory creator, so I like to save my memories.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form. After 'like' either 'like to + verb' or 'like + verb-ing' is correct; here use 'like taking' for natural speech. Also remove redundant words ('the', repeated 'I am') and extra filler for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures of different views' and avoid repeating pronouns.

× Whenever I go out with my friends as well as family, I explore different.

✓ Whenever I go out with my friends or family, I explore different places.

The clause ends abruptly with 'different' as an adjective without a noun, creating a sentence structure error. Replace 'as well as' with 'or' for natural coordination and add the noun 'places' after 'different'.

× Yes, mostly I like the views in the rural areas because in the mostly in the villages and there are a lot of granary as well as the trees and they can presenting our good and pleasant look that is admiring and.

✓ Yes, mostly I like views in rural areas because in villages there are many granaries and trees that present a pleasant and admirable scene.

Problems: incorrect preposition and article use ('in the rural areas' -> 'in rural areas' or 'in the villages'); 'in the mostly' is incorrect ordering; 'a lot of granary' should be 'many granaries'; 'presenting' is the wrong verb form and passive structure; sentence trailing 'and' makes it incomplete. Correct by using 'there are many granaries and trees that present a pleasant and admirable scene.'

× Yes, I prefer to use in our my own country because in Pakistan there are total Four Seasons like summer, winter at 1:00 and 1:00 which can presenting their own view and because in the winter and there are almost greenery everywhere and in the.

✓ Yes, I prefer my own country because Pakistan has four seasons — summer and winter — each with its own views; in winter there is greenery almost everywhere.

Multiple pronoun and phrasing errors: 'use in our my own country' mixes pronouns and verb 'use' is unnecessary; 'there are total Four Seasons' is unidiomatic — use 'Pakistan has four seasons'; 'at 1:00 and 1:00' is meaningless and removed; 'which can presenting' uses wrong verb form; 'their' incorrectly refers to seasons instead of 'its' or 'each'. Also sentence was incomplete. Suggest clear phrasing: 'Pakistan has four seasons... each with its own views.'