Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct article use and singular/plural forms (e.g., "creative ideas" → "creative ideas" or "creative inspiration").

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because, as a photographer, they spark creative inspiration. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets for their dramatic light and city markets for candid cultural moments, which helps me develop new perspectives.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and provide a specific reason or example of what makes rural views appealing.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they change with the seasons and offer quieter, more varied scenery. For example, I like photographing old farmhouses at sunrise and misty fields in autumn, which reveal textures and moods you rarely see in cities.

Gợi ý: Make the preference clear and avoid contradictory statements. Use one strong reason and a specific example. Fix grammar ("the country" or "my country", "sceneries" → "scenes/landscapes").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different cultures and landscapes that I don't see at home. For instance, photographing volcanic coastlines in Iceland or colorful markets in Morocco often inspires new compositions and techniques.

× I love to take pictures of different views because as a photographer I believe it will give me a creative ideas of different perspective.

✓ I love to take pictures of different views because, as a photographer, I believe it will give me creative ideas and different perspectives.

The errors are incorrect article usage and adjective/adverb forms: 'a creative ideas' mixes singular article with plural noun and should be 'creative ideas'; 'different perspective' should be plural 'different perspectives' to match 'ideas'. Adding commas around the phrase 'as a photographer' improves clarity. Suggestion: match plurals correctly and use commas to set off parenthetical phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 13.

× And I also prefer to travel across the world to take different landscape pictures and cultural pictures across the world to experience the difference in each and every part of the world.

✓ I also prefer to travel around the world to take landscape and cultural pictures to experience the differences in each part of the world.

The sentence is repetitive and awkwardly structured ('across the world' repeated, 'landscape pictures and cultural pictures' is redundant, 'each and every part of the world' is wordy). Streamline word choice: use 'around the world', combine nouns ('landscape and cultural pictures'), and use 'differences' plural. Suggestion: avoid repetition and simplify for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26.

× I prefer views from rural areas because it it will have a different views time to time.

✓ I prefer views from rural areas because they have different views from time to time.

Problems: duplicated word 'it it'; tense and agreement issues: 'it will have' is unnecessary future phrasing when stating a general preference; 'a different views' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use simple present for general truths ('they have') and match number ('different views'). Suggestion: remove duplicates and use present tense for habitual facts. Grammar problem type ID: 6.

× When we travel across rural area, we can be able to understand each and every views and it will give fresh perspectives to learn and grow as a photographer.

✓ When we travel across rural areas, we can understand each view, and it gives fresh perspectives for learning and growing as photographers.

Errors: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match context; 'can be able to' is redundant—use 'can' or 'are able to'; 'each and every views' mixes singular quantifier with plural noun—use 'each view' or 'every view'; verb agreement: use present simple 'gives' for general truth; 'to learn and grow as a photographer' adjusted to 'for learning and growing as photographers' to match plural subject. Suggestion: ensure noun-number consistency and avoid redundant modals. Grammar problem type ID: 27.

× I prefer views from other countries because I can always travel in my own country.

✓ I prefer views from other countries because I can always travel within my own country.

Preposition choice: 'travel in my own country' is acceptable but 'travel within my own country' is more natural when contrasting domestic travel with international travel; tense is fine. This mainly improves preposition use and natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 6.

× If I get a chance to travel across the country, I would travel everywhere and I will be able to capture the different sceneries, landscapes, beaches and mountains which give fresh perspectives and creative ideas.

✓ If I get a chance to travel abroad, I will travel everywhere and will be able to capture different sceneries, landscapes, beaches, and mountains that give fresh perspectives and creative ideas.

Conditional tense inconsistency: mixing 'If I get' (first conditional) with 'I would travel' (second conditional) is incorrect. Use 'I will travel' to match first conditional. Also 'across the country' conflicts with earlier preference for other countries; 'travel abroad' is clearer. Use 'that' instead of 'which' for defining clause and remove 'the' before plural nouns. Suggestion: keep conditional forms consistent and choose clear prepositions; list items with commas. Grammar problem type ID: 7.