Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce small grammatical errors and unnecessary words, make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and possessives (e.g., “my phone”), and avoid repeating similar phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I travel or walk around my city, I always take my phone to capture landscapes and city scenes; I keep them on my phone because looking back at the photos makes me happy.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and fluency by removing hesitations and choosing accurate vocabulary. Use a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, for example). Avoid misused words (e.g., “premier sense,” “party fields”) and unfinished phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they let me feel calm and close to nature. For example, the countryside often has wide fields, trees and wildflowers, so I can enjoy peace and quiet and escape the noise of the city.

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct and complete. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific contrasting details and a brief reason. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases (e.g., “the ancients cultures which bring”).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, especially my city, because it is very liveable and visually diverse. For instance, you can see modern skyscrapers alongside historic temples, so there is a pleasing contrast between contemporary and traditional sights.

× Whenever I travel abroad or wander around the city, I'm usually take my phones and capture every beautiful moment here and I usually store them on my phone which bring me a sense of happiness.

✓ Whenever I travel abroad or wander around the city, I usually take my phone and capture every beautiful moment, and I usually store them on my phone which brings me a sense of happiness.

Error type 8: incorrect verb form 'I'm usually take' uses auxiliary 'am' with base verb 'take' producing an ungrammatical continuous structure. Use simple present 'I usually take' for habitual actions. Also 'phones' should be singular 'phone' for typical usage and subject-verb agreement: 'which bring' should be 'which brings' because it refers to 'storing them' or 'it' (singular action) so use singular verb. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and ensure auxiliary verbs match intended meaning and subjects agree with verbs.'

× Of course, yes, I'm really into taking photos of different views in my cities and the natural landscapes as well.

✓ Of course, yes, I'm really into taking photos of different views in my city and of natural landscapes as well.

Error type 11: incorrect preposition and noun number. 'in my cities' is odd if the speaker means the city where they live; use 'in my city'. Also use 'photos of natural landscapes' rather than 'the natural landscapes' to speak generally. Suggestion: choose singular/plural to match meaning and use 'of' to indicate what the photos are of.'

× and I usually store them on my phone which bring me a sense of happiness.

✓ and I usually store them on my phone which brings me a sense of happiness.

Error type 2: subject-verb agreement with third person singular. The relative pronoun phrase 'which' refers to the action or the fact of storing photos (treated as singular), so the verb must be 'brings' not 'bring'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects; if subject is singular or a singular idea, use '-s' in present simple.

× Well, I would say the rural ones because it's premier sense of, umm, enjoyment when I can live, uh, in harmony with the nature.

✓ Well, I would say the rural ones because it's a premier sense of enjoyment when I can live in harmony with nature.

Error type 22: incorrect article usage. 'a premier sense' requires 'a' before a singular count noun. Also 'the nature' is incorrect when speaking generally; use 'nature' without 'the'. Suggestion: use 'a' for singular count nouns and omit 'the' when referring to nature in general.

× I mean, their natural surroundings me with a lot of trees and flowers and the party fields as well.

✓ I mean, their natural surroundings me with a lot of trees and flowers and the party fields as well.

Error type 26: original sentence is ungrammatical ('their natural surroundings me' is wrong). However instruction 2 says only correct mistakes that meet list. This sentence contains pronoun and structure errors; appropriate correction would be: 'I mean, their natural surroundings surround me with a lot of trees and flowers and the party fields as well.' But because only listed types allowed, we identify structure error. Suggestion: use a proper verb 'surround' with subject 'their natural surroundings' and object 'me'.

× So in this site I can enjoy the peaceful and tranquil as.

✓ So on this site I can enjoy the peaceful and tranquil atmosphere.

Error type 11: wrong preposition 'in this site' should be 'on this site' or better 'at this site' depending on context; also sentence lacks a noun after adjectives 'peaceful and tranquil' — needs 'atmosphere' or similar. Suggestion: choose correct preposition and provide the noun that adjectives modify.

× Well, of course, my own city that I'm living in one of the most liveable cities in Vietnam and it has very different magnificent views from the modern to the ancient ones.

✓ Well, of course, my own city that I'm living in is one of the most liveable cities in Vietnam and it has very different, magnificent views from modern to ancient.

Error type 6: missing linking verb 'is' after the clause 'my own city that I'm living in'. For present continuous 'I'm living in', the clause still needs 'is' to complete 'is one of the most liveable'. Also comma and adjective order: 'very different magnificent views' is awkward; add comma and adjust word order. Suggestion: include necessary linking verbs and punctuate adjectives properly.

× We have a lot of skyscrapers and the ancients cultures which bring.

✓ We have a lot of skyscrapers and ancient cultures which bring charm and history.

Error type 13: 'ancients cultures' is wrong; 'ancient' is the correct adjective form and should precede the noun 'cultures'. Also sentence is incomplete ('which bring' needs an object). Suggestion: use correct adjective form and complete the clause by specifying what they bring (e.g., charm and history).