Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题，减少口头语（如 "umm"）并补充一两个具体例子或原因来支持观点。可以用一两句解释何种景色吸引你，以及你避免拍人的原因。注意控制在最多五个句子内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes that impress me. For example, I love capturing mountain ranges at sunrise and the vastness of the ocean because of their dramatic colours and scale. I rarely photograph people because I find portrait composition challenging and prefer scenes without focal subjects.

Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并用连接词组织对比，避免重复词汇（如 "fashion, fashion"）与口头语，使用更恰当的词汇表达城市的繁华与乡村的宁静，并给出短理由或例子。控制在三到五句内。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood: sometimes I prefer urban views, like New York's skyline, because the bustling streets and modern architecture feel energetic and impressive. Other times I choose rural scenes, such as quiet farmland or forests, because they offer peace and natural beauty. Overall, my preference varies with the atmosphere I want to capture.

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅并减少犹豫词（如 "actually", "I guess"），使用更准确的表达说明原因，并举一两个具体例子（例如某个城市或建筑）来支持观点。保持句子清晰连贯，用连接词如 "because" 或 "for example"。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, particularly in Western Europe, because historic architecture and museums are often well preserved and visually striking. For example, I enjoy walking around cities like Prague or Paris to photograph ornate buildings and old libraries that reflect rich cultural history.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially for the sightseeing that really umm, impress me.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially of sightseeing that really impresses me.

句中'sightseeing'用法和后接从句不太自然。将'for the sightseeing'改为'of sightseeing'或直接用'sightseeing that'更符合搭配；主句中从句主语'sightseeing'为单数或不可数，因此谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式'impresses'。建议多看'relate verbs + -ing'和主谓一致的用法。

× Umm like the mountains or the oceans.

✓ Umm, like the mountains or the ocean.

原句中沒有明显的动词错误，但上下文中若指一般类别，应使用单数不可数'ocean'或复数同时可以，但无语境动词第三人称问题；为与前句连贯，改为'ocean'或保持复数皆可。此处主要提醒名词与上下文一致性。

× However, I do not want to take pictures for human beings because I'm not really good at it.

✓ However, I do not want to take pictures of people because I'm not really good at it.

英语里表示“给/关于某人拍照”应使用'take pictures of someone'，而不是'take pictures for someone'。把'human beings'改为更自然的'people'。建议记住'take pictures of'是固定搭配。

× I think it depends. I really like the urban areas views of New York.

✓ I think it depends. I really like the urban views of New York.

'urban areas views'语序和复数使用不当，正确搭配为'urban views'或'views of urban areas'。应保持名词短语内部顺序和单复数一致。建议把修饰词放在名词前或用'of'结构。

× I think that's really fashion, fashion and, uh, makes me feel about the prosperity of human beings and technology.

✓ I think that's really fashionable and makes me think of the prosperity brought by people and technology.

'fashion'作为名词不能直接作表语形容'sounds'，应使用形容词'fashionable'。另外'makes me feel about'不自然，常用'makes me think of'或'makes me feel'加具体内容。建议区分名词和形容词的用法，并用固定搭配表达感受。

× Uh, but for some rural areas, I think it's really peaceful and chill.

✓ Uh, but in some rural areas, I think it's really peaceful and relaxed.

'for some rural areas'介词使用不当，描述地点常用'in'. 'chill'为口语形容词，但在正式表达中可用'relaxed'。建议使用正确介词并选择适合的形容词。

× Actually I prefer views in other countries, especially countries in Europe, Western Europe, I guess because the cultural architectures and some museums like libraries are protected well at their countries, so I would like them.

✓ Actually I prefer views in other countries, especially in Western Europe, because cultural architecture and museums, like libraries, are well protected in those countries, so I like them.

句中有多处数和搭配错误：'countries in Europe, Western Europe'措辞重复，应改为'in Western Europe'；'the cultural architectures'不自然，architecture通常不可数，改为'cultural architecture'或'architectural heritage'；'protected well at their countries'介词和指代错误，应用'in those countries'。此外末尾'so I would like them'改为'so I like them'更自然。建议注意可数/不可数名词、介词搭配和代词指代一致。