Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 짧고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 주제문을 명확히 하고(예: ‘Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.’) 그 다음에 이유와 구체적 설명을 연결어로 덧붙이세요. 또한 단수·복수와 관사 사용을 고치고, 문장을 완성해야 합니다. 예시로 이유(빛, 색깔, 감정 등)와 구체적 상황(해질녘, 파도, 구도 등)을 하나나 두 가지 포함하세요. 문장은 최대 5개 이내로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because they capture unique moods. For example, I especially like taking pictures of the ocean at sunset because the warm light and moving waves create dramatic colors and reflections. Also, I often focus on the shoreline to show patterns in the sand, which makes the photos more interesting.

Gợi ý: 문장이 끊기고 문법과 어순에 오류가 있습니다. 명확한 주제문(‘I prefer rural views.’)을 말한 뒤, 연결어(for example, because, such as)를 사용해 구체적 이유를 제시하세요. 세부사항으로 꽃, 나무 외에 소리(새소리), 공기, 넓은 풍경 등을 언급하면 좋습니다. 불완전한 문장을 완성하고 단어를 정확히 사용하세요 (예: 'There are a lot of flowers and trees' 등).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel peaceful and natural. For example, there are many flowers and trees, and you can often hear birds singing, which creates a calm atmosphere. In addition, wide open fields allow me to take landscape photos that show depth and scale.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달은 되지만 단어 선택과 문법이 부정확합니다('race'는 틀림). 먼저 주제문을 명확히 하고 비교 표현(‘I prefer views abroad to those at home because...’)을 사용하세요. 구체적으로 어떤 점이 다른지(특별한 건축물, 광대한 자연, 문화적 다양성 등)를 예로 들어 설명하고, 마지막에 자신의 나라의 장점이나 한계도 간단히 덧붙이면 균형 잡힌 답이 됩니다.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in other countries because they often feature unique architecture and vast natural landscapes I haven't seen before. For instance, in some countries you can find ancient temples or towering modern skyscrapers alongside dramatic mountains or deserts. However, my country also has beautiful local scenery, such as coastal cliffs and traditional villages.

× Yes, I do. I like taking picture everything. Especially I like taking pictures of the ocean because.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of everything. Especially, I like taking pictures of the ocean.

The noun 'picture' needs to be plural when referring to pictures in general, and 'everything' should follow the plural noun: 'taking pictures of everything.' Also add a comma after 'Especially' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of everything' and join the fragments into complete sentences.

× Well, actually I prefer views in rural areas. There are a lot of flowers and trees and. Usually. There have.

✓ Well, actually I prefer views in rural areas. There are a lot of flowers and trees there, usually.

Fragments 'and.' and 'Usually.' are incomplete. 'There have' is incorrect; use 'there are' to indicate existence. Combine ideas into a single complete sentence: 'There are a lot of flowers and trees there, usually.' This fixes sentence fragments and corrects the verb for existence.

× I prefer race in other countries because other countries have special building and huge nature. But in my country.

✓ I prefer to travel in other countries because other countries have special buildings and vast natural scenery. But in my country, ...

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by an infinitive ('to travel') or a gerund; 'prefer race' is incorrect. 'Building' should be plural 'buildings' when speaking generally. 'Huge nature' is unnatural; use 'vast natural scenery' or 'large natural areas.' The final fragment 'But in my country.' is incomplete and needs continuation. Suggest using 'I prefer to travel in other countries because they have special buildings and vast natural scenery, but in my country...'