Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice, and avoid repetition. Add one specific reason or brief example using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I visited the coast last year, I took pictures of the sunset so I can look back and recall the colours and the feeling. This way, photos serve as visual memories.

Gợi ý: Use correct vocabulary and a clear sentence structure. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give one specific, coherent reason using a linking word and correct nouns (e.g., "streets").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because the light filtering between buildings creates dramatic scenes. For instance, I like photographing busy streets where people, cars and shop signs create interesting compositions.

Gợi ý: Make your answer fluent and polite. Start with a clear preference sentence, avoid fragmented phrases and incorrect words. Give a specific reason and a short example, and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy well-planned streets and different architectural styles. For example, when I travelled to Japan, the orderly streets and clean parks made it easier to find interesting photo subjects.

× I love having a momentous of the beautiful things that I saw with my eyes.

✓ I love having a moment of the beautiful things that I saw with my eyes.

The student used 'momentous' (an adjective) instead of the noun 'moment'. This is a word choice error that affects singular/plural form and meaning. Use the noun 'moment' to express a single remembered time. Suggestion: replace adjective forms with the correct noun when referring to a single event; if multiple events, use 'moments'.

× And I love it because I can feel it any other day when I want to remember it.

✓ And I love it because I can feel it on another day when I want to remember it.

The phrase 'any other day' is awkward here; 'on another day' is the correct prepositional phrase. This is a preposition/adverb usage issue that affects clarity in present/future reference. Suggestion: use 'on another day' to indicate experiencing the feeling at a different time.

× I prefer fuse in urban areas because in urban areas you can see sunlight picking through buildings and then you can take pictures of the busy St. and how the people were walking.

✓ I prefer to focus on urban areas because in cities you can see sunlight streaming between buildings, and you can take pictures of busy streets and people walking.

Multiple issues: 'fuse' is incorrect word choice for the intended meaning (should be 'focus' or 'taking photos in'); 'picking through' is wrong verb choice — use 'streaming between' or 'shining through'; 'St.' abbreviation is unclear — use 'streets'; tense inconsistency 'were walking' should be simple present 'walking' to match general statement. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('focus', 'streaming') and maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.

× I. I am better suited to diffuse in other countries because my countries is kind of messy.

✓ I am more comfortable traveling in other countries because my country is kind of messy.

Several errors: extra 'I.' is unnecessary; 'better suited to diffuse' is incorrect — likely 'more comfortable' or 'better suited to travel' is intended; 'countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own nation, and the verb must agree: 'my country is'. Suggestion: remove the extra fragment, use correct collocation ('comfortable traveling') and ensure singular noun with matching verb.

× Even the streets are not perfectly planned.

✓ Even the streets are not perfectly planned.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as a present simple statement describing a general condition, so no correction to wording is necessary. However, in context with previous corrections, ensure consistent present simple tense for general truths. Suggestion: keep present simple 'are not perfectly planned' to describe ongoing condition.