Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は肯定しているが、表現がやや不自然で冗長です。まず主題文で明確に答え、その後に具体例を1〜2つ述べるとよいです。列挙する際は不要な語（例："some" や 最後の "so" のような曖昧な終わり方）を避け、語順や名詞の数に注意してください。また「my chairs」は文脈で意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に説明するか別の被写体に置き換えてください。最長5文以内で、接続詞（for example, such as, because）を使って論理的につなぎましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of night cityscapes because the lights create dramatic contrasts. I also like photographing my children during outdoor activities to capture natural moments.

Gợi ý: 主旨は伝わるが文法や語の使い方に誤りがあります（例："urban area"は単数形より複数形の方が自然、"which is lighten up"は文法的に誤り）。理由を述べる際は一句で簡潔に示し、続けて具体的な例を付け加えると良いです。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を正しく使い、能動態の簡潔な文を心がけてください。夜景を説明するときは"lit up"や"illuminated"など正しい形容表現を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy night scenes. For example, I sometimes climb a nearby hill at night to photograph the city buildings when they are brightly lit up.

Gợi ý: 回答は意図があるが語彙と構成が不自然です（"prefer using my country"は誤用、"characters"の意味が曖昧、文末が未完）。まず明確に"I prefer the views in my own country"のように述べ、次に具体的な理由を2つ挙げてください。文化や景観を説明する際は具体例（寺院、祭り、ネオン街など）を出し、曖昧な語（"young culture"や"vivid cars"）はより適切な語に置き換えましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, Japan, because it offers a mix of traditional and modern scenery. For example, you can see ancient temples and shrines beside lively neon-lit streets and colorful festivals, which makes photographing there very interesting.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of some views, like night scenery or my chairs, my children.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of various views, such as night scenery, my chairs, and my children.

The student used 'some views' which is acceptable but 'chairs, my children' lacked parallel structure and comma usage. Use 'various' or 'different' and a parallel list with 'and' to correctly present multiple plural nouns. Also use 'such as' instead of 'like' for examples.

× I prefer urban area because I like night scenery, so sometimes I go to the mountain at night and take some pictures of buildings, which is lighten up.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like night scenery, so sometimes I go to the mountains at night and take pictures of buildings, which are lit up.

Several plural/singular issues: 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match general preference; 'the mountain' should be plural or drop article: 'mountains' or 'a mountain' — here 'mountains' fits general activities. 'take some pictures' -> 'take pictures' more natural. 'which is lighten up' is ungrammatical: the plural subject 'buildings' requires plural verb 'are' and 'lit up' is the correct past participle adjective form. Use 'are lit up' to describe their illuminated state.

× I prefer using my country because my country, Japan, has a lot of characters like Japanese traditional culture or Japanese young culture with vivid cars, so.

✓ I prefer my own country because my country, Japan, has many distinctive features, such as traditional Japanese culture and youth culture with colorful cars.

'Using my country' is incorrect — prefer 'my country' or 'my own country'. 'has a lot of characters' is unnatural; use 'has many distinctive features' or 'characteristics'. 'Japanese young culture' should be 'youth culture' or 'young people’s culture'. 'vivid cars' is odd; 'colorful cars' is clearer. Lastly, sentence ended with 'so.' which is incomplete; remove or complete it.