Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, ngắt câu và lựa chọn từ cho tự nhiên hơn. Tránh câu quá dài bằng cách tách thành câu ngắn rõ ràng; sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ: “instant” → không phù hợp, “shorts” nên là “shots” hoặc “photos”, “a relaxing hobby” cần mạo từ). Thêm liên từ thích hợp và chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn để làm câu mạch lạc và giàu thông tin hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photographs of different landscapes. For example, I enjoy capturing mountains at sunrise and modern cityscapes because photography helps me preserve memories of places and people I meet. I also like sharing my photos on social media, and I find this hobby relaxing and good for my creativity.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa một vài lỗi từ vựng và collocation (ví dụ: “bustling energy of” → thiếu mạo từ, “a total bread of fresh air” → sai: phải là “a breath of fresh air”). Nên giữ câu ngắn, có liên từ rõ ràng và minh họa cụ thể để tăng tính tự nhiên. Thêm một câu kết ngắn để khép ý.

Ví dụ: Honestly, it depends on my mood. When I feel energetic, I prefer the bustling energy of a metropolitan skyline with its vibrant lines and modern architecture. However, if I'm stressed, a trip to the countryside is a breath of fresh air because it offers peaceful, unspoiled scenery. So I enjoy both depending on how I feel.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng có thể rõ ràng và chi tiết hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó nêu lý do ngắn kèm ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh mơ hồ như “I have only seen in movies” — có thể mở rộng là ‘in films or online’.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both views in my own country and those abroad. I love discovering hidden gems at home because they feel personal and meaningful; for instance, a secluded beach near my town is very special to me. At the same time, I’m attracted to famous landmarks overseas, such as the Eiffel Tower, which I’ve only seen in films and photos but would love to visit in person.

× Yes, I love snapping photographs of diverse landscapes for instant mountains at sunrise and modern cityscapes because photography helps me preserve memories of places and people I meet.

✓ Yes, I love snapping photographs of diverse landscapes, for instance mountains at sunrise and modern cityscapes, because photography helps me preserve memories of the places and people I meet.

Use of articles: 'for instant' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'for instance'. Add commas for clarity. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'places and people I meet' because we refer to specific people and places encountered; in English, plural nouns referring to a defined set often take the definite article. Suggestion: replace 'for instant' with 'for instance', insert commas, and add 'the' before 'places and people I meet'.

× I also enjoy sharing my shorts on social media and find taking photos of relaxing hobby that improves my creativity.

✓ I also enjoy sharing my shots on social media and find taking photos a relaxing hobby that improves my creativity.

Word choice and sentence structure: 'shorts' is incorrect for photos; correct word is 'shots'. 'Find taking photos of relaxing hobby' is ungrammatical — the intended structure is 'find taking photos a relaxing hobby'. Use 'a' before 'relaxing hobby'. Suggestion: use 'shots' not 'shorts', and restructure to 'find taking photos a relaxing hobby'.

× To be honest, it's a bit of a toss up as it really boils down to my current state of mind.

✓ To be honest, it's a bit of a toss-up as it really boils down to my current state of mind.

Hyphenation with gerund phrases: 'toss up' is commonly written 'toss-up' as a noun; not a verb error but orthographic. No verb form change needed. Suggestion: write 'toss-up' with a hyphen.

× When I'm feeling energetic, I'm drawn to bustling energy of a metropolitan skyline with its vibrant lines and modern architecture.

✓ When I'm feeling energetic, I'm drawn to the bustling energy of a metropolitan skyline with its vibrant lines and modern architecture.

Missing definite article: 'bustling energy' is a specific quality so it requires 'the' before it. This is not a verb agreement error per se but fits article usage impacting subject phrase. Suggestion: insert 'the' before 'bustling energy'.

× However, whenever I feel overwhelmed, a trip to the countryside is a total bread of fresh air because it offers peaceful, unspoiled scenery.

✓ However, whenever I feel overwhelmed, a trip to the countryside is a total breath of fresh air because it offers peaceful, unspoiled scenery.

Word choice/article: 'bread of fresh air' is incorrect — the idiom is 'breath of fresh air'. Use 'breath'. No article change needed. Suggestion: replace 'bread' with 'breath'.

× I don't think they are mutually exclusive.

✓ I don't think they are mutually exclusive.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no change. Suggestion: none.

× I love the hidden gems in my own country because they feel more personal and meaningful.

✓ I love the hidden gems in my own country because they feel more personal and meaningful.

Sentence is correct; preposition 'in' is correctly used. Suggestion: none.

× I'm also drawn to visiting famous landmarks abroad like the Eiffel Tower, which I have only seen in movies.

✓ I'm also drawn to visiting famous landmarks abroad, like the Eiffel Tower, which I have only seen in movies.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense; just add a comma after 'abroad' for clarity. Suggestion: add a comma for clarity.