Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I don't like take photo of different views because I don't like take photo or just on my I like go to the nature but I I think take photo is boring.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer various views because the open, the open space and natural sensory help me relax after a busy walk in the in the city. For example, seeing views and hills reduce stress and fuse referencing.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Perfume prefer views on my country because she because it have a have my childhood memory. I think it can.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 句子有严重的语法和表达问题,影响清晰度。回答没有直接的主题句结构且过多重复,超出规则允许的连贯性。建议先用一句明确的主题句回答问题(Yes/No + 简短原因),然后用一到两句具体细节或例子支持。注意动词形式(take → taking / take photos)和代词使用,避免重复词。可练习把话分成短句,使用连接词如 because, for example。
Ví dụ: No, I don't really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I find photography boring. I prefer to just experience nature without a camera; for example, when I walk in a forest I focus on the sounds and smells rather than taking photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答方向比较明确但表达不够准确,有重复和词汇错误(natural sensory, fuse referencing)。建议开门见山给出偏好(urban or rural),然后用两到三个具体理由支持,使用正确词汇如 open spaces, fresh air, scenery,并用连接词(because, for example, so)使句子更连贯。注意发音和搭配练习,例如 'reduce stress' 使用恰当。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because open spaces and fresh air help me relax after a busy day in the city. For example, seeing hills and fields reduces my stress and makes me feel calmer, so I often go to the countryside at weekends.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且有大量语法和词汇错误(Perfume? she? have a have),无法直接理解观点。建议先明确回答(I prefer views in my own country),然后给出具体原因,如 childhood memories, familiarity, cultural connection。使用正确句型和时态,避免不相关的词语。可准备一两个简短的例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of my childhood and familiar places. For example, seeing the river near my hometown always brings back memories of family picnics, which makes those views more special to me.
× I don't like take photo of different views because I don't like take photo or just on my I like go to the nature but I I think take photo is boring.
✓ I don't like taking photos of different views because I don't like taking photos; I prefer going into nature, and I think taking photos is boring.
句中多处动词后应接动名词(-ing)而不是不定式或原形动词:在英语中,动词 like 后跟动名词表示习惯或偏好(like taking),同样 prefer/to go 这里用 prefer + doing 或 prefer + to do,但原句混用且结构混乱。建议将重复和语无伦次的部分简化,保持并列结构一致,使用 taking 和 going into 来表达。
× I don't like take photo of different views because I don't like take photo or just on my I like go to the nature but I I think take photo is boring.
✓ I don't like taking photos of different views because I don't like taking photos; I prefer going into nature, and I think taking photos is boring.
原句中使用 singular 'photo' 与泛指多个景色不一致,应用复数 'photos' 或使用不可数结构 'photography'。此外有多余词(or just on my)导致句子混乱。建议根据语境把 'photo' 改为 'photos' 或用 'photography'。
× I prefer various views because the open, the open space and natural sensory help me relax after a busy walk in the in the city.
✓ I prefer varied views because open spaces and natural scenery help me relax after a busy walk in the city.
原句时态总体为一般现在时描述习惯,需保持一致。'the open' 不自然,应为复数 'open spaces';'natural sensory' 用词错误,应为 'natural scenery'。主语为复数(open spaces and natural scenery)所以用 'help' 是正确的。建议用 'varied views' 或 'various views' 并修正名词搭配。
× I prefer various views because the open, the open space and natural sensory help me relax after a busy walk in the in the city.
✓ I prefer varied views because open spaces and natural scenery help me relax after a busy walk in the city.
原句中 'natural sensory' 是错误的词性搭配,应该使用名词 'scenery'(景色)而不是形容词或名词 'sensory'(感官的)。同时 'the open' 多余且词形错误,应使用复数 'open spaces'。建议注意形容词与名词的正确搭配。
× For example, seeing views and hills reduce stress and fuse referencing.
✓ For example, seeing views and hills reduces stress and relieves tension.
原句结构混乱且动词与主语不一致:主语 'seeing views and hills' 作单一整体时通常视为动名词短语,用单数动词 'reduces';此外 'fuse referencing' 无意义,应改为 'relieves tension' 等常用表达。建议用自然搭配 'reduces stress' 或 'relieves tension'。
× Perfume prefer views on my country because she because it have a have my childhood memory. I think it can.
✓ I prefer views in my country because they remind me of my childhood memories.
原句中 'Perfume' 不是人称代词,应为 'I';'on my country' 介词错误(应为 'in my country');'she' 和 'it' 使用混乱且指代不明;'have a have my childhood memory' 语序和词形错误,正确表达为 'remind me of my childhood memories'。建议使用正确的代词和固定搭配 'remind someone of something',并将单复数形式与语义一致。
× I prefer various views because the open, the open space and natural sensory help me relax after a busy walk in the in the city.
✓ I prefer varied views because open spaces and natural scenery help me relax after a busy walk in the city.
原句中 'in the in the city' 多余重复,正确介词为 'in the city'。此外 'views on my country'(原另一句)也应为 'in my country'。建议注意介词固定搭配并删除重复词。