Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two concise, specific reasons using correct grammar and simple linking words. For example, avoid unclear phrases like “this Christian in pictures” and replace them with concrete meanings (e.g., “the story or mood of a place”). Keep your answer to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like to capture landscapes and cityscapes because each place has a different mood and story. For instance, I photograph sunsets and street scenes to remember how a place felt.

Gợi ý: Focus your response on one clear preference and give specific reasons using correct vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer rural views.”), then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (because, and, also). Avoid hesitations and unclear words like “lunar” or “people viewing.”

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, the countryside usually has more trees, flowers and wildlife, and it feels peaceful compared with busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and compare your preference clearly. Use a simple structure: state your preference, then give specific comparative details (e.g., architecture, nature, atmosphere). Avoid unrelated or distorted phrases (e.g., “Microsoft deals,” “laser”). Keep sentences short and coherent with linking words like “however” or “while.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because their architecture and landscapes are often different from what I see at home. For example, I enjoy visiting places with historic buildings and unique parks, while my country’s city centers can feel more modern and similar to each other.

× Different pictures is various view and I get to know that this Christian in pictures.

✓ Different pictures are various views, and I learned that this is a Christian scene in the pictures.

The subject 'Different pictures' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' (singular and plural issue). 'Various view' should be plural 'various views' to match 'pictures'. The phrase 'I get to know' is unnatural here and should be past 'I learned' to indicate understanding from seeing the pictures. 'that this Christian in pictures' is missing a noun; 'scene' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: match plural subjects and verbs, use natural collocations (learned that, Christian scene).

× I think, uh, we're going to view is more beautiful than city views because of lunar has, do not have the trees and flowers, uh, and many animals.

✓ I think rural views are more beautiful than city views because rural areas have many trees, flowers, and animals.

This sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun and noun phrases. 'We're going to view' is incorrect and likely intended as 'rural views' (incorrect use of pronouns/nouns). 'Because of lunar has, do not have the trees and flowers' is ungrammatical; it should state that rural areas 'have' trees and flowers. Remove unnecessary fillers and rephrase for clarity. Suggestion: identify intended nouns, use correct noun forms ('rural views'), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('rural areas have').

× So I, I like, I prefer the people viewing, uh, in.

✓ So I prefer viewing people in rural areas.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and fragments ('I, I like, I prefer') and an unclear phrase 'the people viewing, uh, in.' This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure. The corrected version removes redundancy and clarifies the intended meaning. Suggestion: avoid repetition, place the object and location together ('viewing people in rural areas').

× A Microsoft deals from a shopping center, Korean versioning buildings and cars that are indicated in the laser can have many trees and wildlife and flowers.

✓ For example, a market near a shopping center, Korean-style buildings, and cars can be seen, but some rural areas have many trees, wildlife, and flowers.

The original is a fragmented and confusing sentence with incorrect word choices ('Microsoft deals', 'Korean versioning') and unclear connections. This is a sentence structure error. The correction restructures the ideas: acknowledges urban elements (market, buildings, cars) and contrasts them with rural characteristics (trees, wildlife, flowers). Suggestion: break the sentence into clear clauses, use correct nouns ('market' instead of 'Microsoft'), and use parallel lists for clarity.