Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking different pictures in my In My Trap invite trip because I think it's very meaningful to take some photos about your trip.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer I prefer rural areas view because I think it's more natural than the urban area and the air is so fresh can make me very comfortable and feel refreshed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views, both of them, but as my points I like to the other countries view because I think it's very difficult, very different from our countries and it's very beautiful to take some photos.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了喜好,但有语法和词汇错误,句子不够自然且有冗余。建议:1) 开头用简洁明确的话直接回答(主题句)。2) 用一到两句补充具体原因并举例,避免不必要的短语(如“In My Trap invite trip”应改为“during my trips”)。3) 注意时态和名词的搭配(e.g. “take photos of a trip”改为“take photos during trips”)。练习时可把答案控制在2–3句内,用连词如“because”或“for example”衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos during my trips because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph landscapes and local markets to capture the atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但有重复和语法问题。建议:1) 去掉重复词(例如不要说“I prefer I prefer”),并用单数/复数和冠词正确搭配(“rural views”或“the countryside”)。2) 用连接词把理由组织好,例如“because”后接完整句子,或用“which”引导定语从句。3) 提供具体细节或例子(例如徒步、看星空),句子保持2–3句。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside feels more natural and peaceful than the city. The fresh air and wide open spaces help me relax, for example I enjoy hiking in the hills and watching the sunset.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答展示了对两者的偏好,但表达混乱、词不达意且有语法错误。建议:1) 先给出直接回答(e.g. “I like both, but I prefer views in other countries.”)。2) 用清晰的理由支持偏好,避免模糊或错误词汇(“difficult”不合适,可改为“distinct”或“unique”)。3) 给出具体例子说明差异(文化、建筑或自然景观),并用连接词如“because”或“for example”衔接。控制在2–3句内。
Ví dụ: I like views in both my country and abroad, but I prefer those in other countries because they often look very different and offer unique scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional markets and historic architecture abroad because they give me fresh perspectives.
× Yes, I like taking different pictures in my In My Trap invite trip because I think it's very meaningful to take some photos about your trip.
✓ Yes, I like taking different pictures on my trip because I think it's very meaningful to take photos of your journey.
句子结构混乱与冗余:“In My Trap invite trip”不合逻辑且可能是口误,应简化为“my trip”。介词搭配不当,“take some photos about your trip”应为“take photos of your journey”。建议:说话前先理清要表达的名词短语,使用简洁的介词搭配(take photos of ... / on my trip)。
× I prefer I prefer rural areas view because I think it's more natural than the urban area and the air is so fresh can make me very comfortable and feel refreshed.
✓ I prefer rural views because I think they are more natural than urban areas, and the fresh air makes me feel comfortable and refreshed.
存在复数/单数不一致与句子重复问题:原句“I prefer I prefer”重复;“rural areas view”名词短语应该用复数或复合形式“rural views”;比较对象应一致,使用“they are more natural than urban areas”。另外,“the air is so fresh can make me very comfortable”为并列从句结构错误,应改为“and the fresh air makes me feel...”。建议:确保主语和谓语在数上保持一致,避免重复,复合句使用连接词并正确变换动词形式。
× I prefer views, both of them, but as my points I like to the other countries view because I think it's very difficult, very different from our countries and it's very beautiful to take some photos.
✓ I like both kinds of views, but I prefer views in other countries because I think they are very different from those in our country and very beautiful for taking photos.
时态/用法和句子结构问题:原句中“as my points I like to the other countries view”结构不通,动词和介词使用错误;“it's very difficult”用词不当,应为“different”或“distinct”,并且主谓一致需用“they are”。建议:使用简单现在时表达习惯或偏好;用clear对比结构如“different from those in our country”。