Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh, um) and correct verb forms (e.g., 'love taking' not 'love to taking'). Also specify what kinds of scenes you like and why to make your answer more informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go outside I often photograph landscapes and street scenes because I enjoy capturing the light and mood. Also, I like sharing these photos with friends online to show the places I visit.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference or clearly explain why it depends, and provide specific comparisons using linking words (for example, 'however' or 'on the other hand'). Avoid repeating phrases and reduce hesitation. Use accurate descriptions (e.g., 'urban areas can be bustling but architecturally interesting; rural areas offer natural scenery').

Ví dụ: It depends on what I want to photograph. Urban areas are great for architectural details and lively street scenes, while rural areas offer peaceful natural landscapes and wide-open views. So if I want dramatic buildings I choose the city, but for nature shots I prefer the countryside.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific examples comparing your country and others. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'on the other hand' to structure your points. Avoid vague statements and correct grammar (e.g., 'different countries have different identities').

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each has unique qualities. For example, Bangladesh has distinctive river landscapes and cultural festivals that are hard to find elsewhere, while other countries might offer mountain scenery or modern skylines, so I like photographing both for different reasons.

× Yes, I love to taking pictures in different views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the base verb or gerund 'taking' without 'to'. Using 'to taking' is incorrect. Also use the preposition 'of' with 'views' rather than 'in'. Improve by saying 'I love taking pictures of different views.'

× so when I was, uh, when whenever I go outside, uh, I love to capture moment.

✓ So when I go outside, I love to capture moments.

The sentence mixes past marker 'when I was' with present habitual 'whenever I go'. Use a single tense for habitual actions: present simple 'when I go' and plural 'moments'. Also use gerund without 'to': 'love to capture' -> 'love capturing' or 'love to capture' both acceptable; here 'love to capture moments' or 'love capturing moments.'

× I love to capture, uh, the environment and shy and I love to share that, that this picture with others.

✓ I love capturing the environment and sky, and I love sharing these pictures with others.

Use gerund 'capturing' after 'love' or use 'love to capture' but maintain consistency. 'Shy' is incorrect word; likely 'sky'. 'This picture' should be plural 'these pictures' if referring generally. Use parallel structure 'capturing ... and sharing ...'.

× Uh, this make me happy because I want to told, uh, something with my pictures.

✓ This makes me happy because I want to tell something with my pictures.

Subject-verb agreement: 'this make' -> 'this makes' (present simple). 'Want to told' mixes present 'want to' with past participle 'told'; correct is base form 'tell'. Use present tense for general statements.

× Uh, It depends because, uh, there is different perspective,

✓ It depends because there are different perspectives.

Use plural 'perspectives' to match 'different' and subject-verb agreement: 'there is' should be 'there are' for plural noun. Also plural better conveys variety.

× Uh, urban area is, uh, is usually the calm and very beautiful place.

✓ An urban area is usually calm and a very beautiful place.

Add article 'An' before 'urban area'. Remove redundant 'is'. 'The calm' should be 'calm' as an adjective. Insert 'a' before 'very beautiful place'. Maintain correct adjective order.

× On the other side, the rural area is not that much clean and uh, umm, uh, and uh, rural area not that much clean, uh, if you go.

✓ On the other hand, rural areas are not that clean, especially in some places you visit.

Use 'On the other hand' not 'side'. Use plural 'rural areas' and 'are' for agreement. 'Not that much clean' is awkward; say 'not that clean'. Rephrase to be concise and grammatical.

× Uh, well, there are different country has different, uh, their identity in our Bangladesh,

✓ Well, different countries have different identities; in Bangladesh,

Use plural 'countries' with plural verb 'have'. 'There are different country has different' is ungrammatical. Reorder: 'different countries have different identities'. Also 'in our Bangladesh' should be 'in Bangladesh' or 'in our country, Bangladesh.'

× uh, you can not find this vibe or the, uh, this type of nature on the other country and that same things, uh, you cannot find the others cultures in our country.

✓ You cannot find this vibe or this type of nature in other countries, and similarly you cannot find other cultures in our country.

Use 'in other countries' not 'on the other country'. 'That same things' should be 'similarly' or 'the same goes for'. 'Others cultures' incorrect; use 'other cultures'. Maintain plural consistency.

× There have different, different.

✓ There are many differences.

'There have different, different' is ungrammatical. Use 'There are many differences' or 'There are various differences' to express the idea. 'There are' is correct existential construction followed by plural noun.