Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Not really, because I'm not a person who like to take a picture. So my gallery in my phone doesn't have a picture.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural area view because I like nature. I like natural uh such as such as inspirance In Thailand is has mountains and waterfall.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer view in my county rather than the auto county because I feel like I, I'm I'm able to test it, I'm able to visit it, I I can see.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason and a small example. Correct grammar (e.g. verb agreement, articles) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.
Ví dụ: Not really. I don't usually take many photos because I prefer enjoying the moment. For example, when I travel I focus on sightseeing rather than taking pictures, so my phone gallery is mostly empty.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and correct vocabulary and grammar (plural/singular, articles). Mention concrete examples and explain why you prefer them.
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love being close to nature. For instance, in Thailand there are mountains and waterfalls, and I enjoy hiking and listening to birds, which helps me relax.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly with one main reason and a specific supporting detail. Fix pronunciation/word choice errors (county → country, auto county → other countries) and remove hesitations. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they are easier to visit and I know them well. For example, I can easily travel to nearby waterfalls and mountains without planning a long trip abroad.
× Not really, because I'm not a person who like to take a picture.
✓ Not really, because I'm not a person who likes to take pictures.
The relative clause 'who like' refers to 'a person' (singular), so the verb must be third person singular 'likes' (subject-verb agreement). Also plural 'pictures' is more natural when talking about taking photos in general. Suggestion: match verb form to the singular subject and use plural for general activities (who likes to take pictures).
× So my gallery in my phone doesn't have a picture.
✓ So the gallery on my phone doesn't have any pictures.
Use the definite article 'the' to refer to a specific gallery (the one on the speaker's phone) and 'on my phone' is the usual preposition. Also 'any pictures' is more natural for indicating absence. Suggestion: use 'the' + 'on' and plural 'pictures' with 'any' for negation.
× I prefer rural area view because I like nature.
✓ I prefer rural views because I like nature.
'Rural area view' is unnatural and singular; use plural 'rural views' to refer generally to views in rural areas. 'Prefer' takes the object in plural form here. Suggestion: use 'rural views' or 'views of rural areas' for clarity.
× I like natural uh such as such as inspirance In Thailand is has mountains and waterfall.
✓ I like natural scenery, such as the mountains and waterfalls in Thailand.
Multiple issues: 'natural' needs a noun (e.g., 'natural scenery'). Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'such as'. 'inspirance' is incorrect; use 'scenery'. Use 'the' for specific features and plural 'waterfalls'. Also 'is has' is ungrammatical — use a simple noun phrase 'the mountains and waterfalls in Thailand.' Suggestion: say 'I like natural scenery, such as the mountains and waterfalls in Thailand.'
× I prefer view in my county rather than the auto county because I feel like I, I'm I'm able to test it, I'm able to visit it, I I can see.
✓ I prefer views in my country rather than other countries because I feel like I can visit them and see them.
Use plural 'views' to talk generally and 'country' spelling corrected. 'Auto county' seems to be 'other countries' — use that. Avoid repeated fillers ('I, I'm I'm'). Use 'can visit them and see them' to refer back to 'views' (pronoun agreement). Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer views in my country rather than in other countries because I can visit and see them.'