Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use more natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g., "it's also helps" → "they also help"). Use varied vocabulary such as "capture scenes" or "landscapes."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes because they help me preserve memories, and I often share the best shots on Facebook. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over a river and posted it to show my friends where I’d been.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and use clearer sentence structure. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because," "for example"). Correct informal phrases like "gonna" to "will" or "prefer." Add specific descriptive vocabulary (e.g., "tranquil," "scenic").

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they feel more peaceful and scenic. For example, when I visit my hometown I enjoy photographing rivers, ponds and old trees, which create tranquil and picturesque scenes.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Use accurate collocations (e.g., "natural beauty," "mangrove forests") and avoid repeating the same adjective "beautiful."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Bangladesh has remarkable natural beauty. For instance, the wide rivers and the Sundarbans mangrove forest offer unique landscapes that I find more appealing than typical foreign cityscapes.

× I like to capture the scenario that I visited.

✓ I like to capture the scenes I visit.

The original uses 'scenario' and 'that I visited' which is awkward. Use 'scenes' or 'views' and present simple 'I visit' to match habitual action. Also prefer infinitive or simple present; here 'I like to capture the scenes I visit' is natural.

× And it's also helps me to remember the places I visited and I love to post them in my Facebook or my social media with my friends.

✓ And it also helps me remember the places I visit, and I love to post them on my Facebook or social media to share with my friends.

Use 'it helps' without 's' conflict: 'it' is subject so 'helps' is correct but 'it's also helps' is incorrect because 'it's' = 'it is' plus 'helps' duplicates. Remove contraction: 'it also helps me remember'. Use present simple 'visit' for habitual action. Preposition should be 'on Facebook' and 'to share with my friends' clarifies intent.

× Yeah, I love.

✓ Yeah, I love it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I love' requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the thought referring to taking pictures.

× I prefer rural rural areas because I think it's more natural and more beautiful for rural areas views.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I think they are more natural and more beautiful than urban views.

Repetition 'rural rural' is an error. 'Rural areas' is plural so use 'they' and comparative structure 'more... than' to compare with urban views. 'views' should follow appropriately.

× I always go to my hometown to see trees, rivers and ponds.

✓ I always go to my hometown to see the trees, rivers, and ponds.

Add definite article 'the' because referring to specific natural features in hometown. Comma before 'and' optional but included for clarity.

× I think they are very wonderful views so I think I always gonna prefer.

✓ I think they are wonderful views, so I will always prefer them.

'gonna' is informal and incorrect in written grammar; use 'will' for future preference. Include object 'them' referring to the views.

× I prefer my own country views because my country is very beautiful.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country is very beautiful.

Use 'views in my own country' rather than 'my own country views' for natural word order. Articles are fine but structure improves clarity.

× I think it's one of the most wonderful and naturally beautiful country because it's Bangladesh and Bangladesh is known for beautiful scenarios, beautiful rivers and and mangrove jungle.

✓ I think it is one of the most wonderful and naturally beautiful countries because it is Bangladesh, which is known for its beautiful landscapes, rivers, and the mangrove jungle.

Use plural 'countries' after 'one of the' and 'naturally' should modify 'beautiful' so 'naturally beautiful' is fine. Replace 'scenarios' with 'landscapes' for natural English. Include possessive 'its' and correct duplication 'and and'. Also add 'the' before 'mangrove jungle' and parallel list form.