Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Correct verb forms and use natural expressions (e.g., "used to" instead of "when I was young").

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to enjoy taking photos of many different views because they help me capture memories and create nostalgia later on. However, nowadays I don’t take pictures as often because I’m very busy with work and studies, so I only take photos on special occasions.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Use correct subject-verb agreement and natural collocations (e.g., "gives a more natural feel" or "feel connected to nature").

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and stronger natural colours. For example, I like capturing fields and forests since they give a more natural feel and help me feel connected to nature.

Gợi ý: Make the contrast clearer and correct grammar. Start with a direct reply (e.g., "I prefer..."), then explain briefly with specific examples and a linking phrase such as "however" or "on the other hand." Avoid redundant phrases like "beyond of" and use "beyond" correctly. Give one concrete example of what you mean by "beyond my horizon."

Ví dụ: Although the Philippines has diverse landscapes and beautiful beaches, I prefer photographing scenery in other countries because I want to explore different styles of architecture and landscapes. For instance, I’d love to photograph the dramatic mountains in New Zealand or the historic streets of European cities to broaden my perspective.

× When I was young, photographing everything means a lot to me because it reflects or it will somehow for the future you will get nostalgia in it.

✓ When I was young, photographing everything meant a lot to me because it reflects the past and will give you nostalgia in the future.

Tense consistency and word choice: The sentence begins with 'When I was young' (past time) so the main verb should be past tense ('meant') not present ('means'). Also 'it reflects or it will somehow for the future you will get nostalgia in it' is awkward; replace with 'it reflects the past and will give you nostalgia in the future' to convey the intended meaning clearly and use correct clause structure.

× But now that I am very busy, Nah.

✓ But now that I am very busy, I don't (take many photos).

Incomplete sentence and register: Saying 'Nah' is informal and the sentence lacks a verb. Use present tense 'I am' plus a negative to show current habit: 'I don't take many photos' or 'I rarely take photos now.' This fixes sentence structure and matches present-time reference.

× Actually to answer your question, different views have different vibes but personally I would rather capture rural areas than urban areas because rural areas gives more of a nature feeling and it also connects you with the nature.

✓ Actually, to answer your question, different views have different vibes, but personally I would rather capture rural areas than urban areas because rural areas give more of a natural feeling and also connect you with nature.

Subject-verb agreement: 'rural areas' is plural so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Word choice: 'a nature feeling' is unnatural; use 'a natural feeling' or 'a sense of nature'. Remove the definite article before 'nature' when speaking generally ('connect you with nature'). Also add commas for clarity.

× Honestly, Philippines has a lot to offer because we are rich in different forms of landscape and beaches.

✓ Honestly, the Philippines has a lot to offer because we are rich in different forms of landscape and beaches.

Article error and noun usage: Country names that are plural or formal often require 'the' (the Philippines). Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct. The rest of the sentence is fine in present tense.

× But personally I would rather capture the nature or the scenery in the other countries because I think it is beyond my horizon and also beyond of what I am used to see here in the Philippines.

✓ But personally I would rather capture nature or scenery in other countries because I think it is beyond my horizon and beyond what I am used to seeing here in the Philippines.

Verb form and preposition: Use 'seeing' (present participle) after 'used to' in this context: 'used to seeing' or rephrase as 'what I am used to seeing'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'nature' and 'the other countries' -> use 'other countries'. Also remove 'of' after 'beyond' ('beyond what'). These changes correct verb form and preposition usage and improve naturalness.