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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yeah, of course, I like it very much because I think it's a good way to record some beautiful moments or something important for me.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I prefer rare areas because I feel much more relaxed and peaceful there. For example, the cleaner air and the quiet surroundings makes me unwind after a busy week and being close to the nature makes me comma.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

BU Zhang shuo lah so **** lah.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接,表达了喜好和原因,但可以更简洁并用更准确的词汇替换口语化表达,避免冗余。建议:将主题句明确化,使用一到两句补充具体细节或例子(如拍摄风景、纪念日),并用连接词增强连贯性。注意不要超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture beautiful moments and important memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to remember special trips, and I edit them later to share with friends.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答有思路,但存在词汇错误(“rare areas”应为“rural areas”或“countryside”),语法和用词不准确(“makes me comma”不合适)。建议:先用明确主题句表明偏好,然后用一两条具体原因支持,用正确词汇和连接词(e.g. because, for example, therefore)。注意语法一致性和句子完整。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and less polluted than cities. For example, cleaner air and peaceful surroundings help me relax after a busy week, so I often go to the countryside to take photos and unwind.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: 回答无法理解且包含无意义或非英语词汇,严重影响交流。建议:始终用清晰的英语直接回答问题,给出立场(own country or other countries),然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。保持语句简短、连贯并使用常见词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I enjoyed photographing coastal cliffs abroad that I don't have in my home country, which made the experience more memorable.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× To be honest, I prefer rare areas because I feel much more relaxed and peaceful there.

To be honest, I prefer rural areas because I feel much more relaxed and peaceful there.

原句使用了“rare areas”(罕见的区域),这是用词错误,应为“rural areas”(乡村地区)。此处属于介词/词汇选择问题(在提供的分类中最接近的是“Incorrect use of prepositions/用词不当”)。建议记住常见搭配:rural areas = 乡村地区,urban areas = 城市地区。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× For example, the cleaner air and the quiet surroundings makes me unwind after a busy week and being close to the nature makes me comma.

For example, the cleaner air and the quiet surroundings make me unwind after a busy week, and being close to nature calms me.

原句有两个错误:1) 主谓不一致:主语是复合主语“the cleaner air and the quiet surroundings”,谓语应使用复数动词“make”,而不是“makes”。2) 表达不自然且词汇错误:“being close to the nature makes me comma”中“the nature”前不需要定冠词,应为“nature”,“comma”应为“calm” (平静/放松)。建议复合主语用复数动词,注意不可数名词“nature”前通常不加“the”,并检查拼写。

Sentence structure errors

× BU Zhang shuo lah so **** lah.

I couldn't understand that. Could you please repeat the question?

原句不是英语完整句子,包含非英语口语填充词和无法识别的内容,属于句子结构/表达错误。考试回答应使用完整、明确的句子。如果学生想表达偏好,应直接回答,例如:"I prefer views in my own country because..."。建议练习用完整句子回答问题,避免使用方言或无意义的填充词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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