Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Actually I prefer taking pictures different ways when I travel. Different pictures can make memory. To the future, so I like taking pictures of different waves.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer urban areas because very peaceful and comfortable to me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer view in my country because I am not go yet other countries so I prefer being in my country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar and choose words that fit the meaning (e.g., “views” vs “waves”). Keep to no more than five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes because they remind me of each place. Also, I try different angles and lighting to make my photos more interesting.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and include a specific reason with a linking word. Fix grammar (add subject and articles) and be precise about why urban views appeal to you. One or two supporting details are enough.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the lively streets and modern architecture. For instance, I like photographing skyline scenes and busy markets, which feel interesting and comfortable to me.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical answer and provide a concise reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense/word choice (e.g., “haven’t been to other countries”). If possible, add one specific example to support your preference.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet. For example, I enjoy photographing familiar landscapes and cultural sites here, which feel meaningful and easy to access.
× Actually I prefer taking pictures different ways when I travel.
✓ Actually I prefer taking pictures in different ways when I travel.
Missing preposition 'in' before 'different ways' to link the phrase to 'taking pictures'; use 'taking' (verb+ing) correctly after 'prefer'. Suggestion: say 'prefer taking pictures in different ways' or 'prefer to take pictures in different ways.'
× Different pictures can make memory.
✓ Different pictures can create memories.
The phrase 'make memory' is ungrammatical in English. Use verb 'create' and plural 'memories' to express that pictures produce memorable experiences. Suggestion: use 'create memories' or 'help me remember.'
× To the future, so I like taking pictures of different waves.
✓ In the future, I would like to take pictures of different views.
Fragment 'To the future, so' is incorrect. Use 'In the future' to indicate time and 'would like to' for future preference; 'waves' seems wrong in context of 'views' so corrected to 'views.' Suggestion: 'In the future, I would like to take pictures of different views.'
× I prefer urban areas because very peaceful and comfortable to me.
✓ I prefer urban areas because they are very peaceful and comfortable for me.
Missing subject and verb: need 'they are' to describe 'urban areas.' Preposition 'to me' is incorrect here; use 'for me.' Also add 'very' correctly before adjectives. Suggestion: 'they are very peaceful and comfortable for me.'
× I prefer view in my country because I am not go yet other countries so I prefer being in my country.
✓ I prefer views in my country because I have not been to other countries yet, so I prefer staying in my country.
Use plural 'views' to match general preference. 'I am not go yet' is incorrect: use present perfect 'I have not been to' for experience. 'Other countries' needs 'to' after 'been.' 'Being in my country' is awkward; use 'staying in my country.' Suggestion: 'I prefer views in my country because I have not been to other countries yet, so I prefer staying in my country.'