Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but reduce redundancy, correct grammar, and improve coherence. Use a concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Fix tense and article errors (e.g., “a trip last time to a beach” → “a recent trip to the beach”) and avoid repetition like “remember every moment that I've shared with my friends and family” (could be shortened).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories from my travels. For example, on a recent trip to the beach with friends, I took several landscape shots and later posted them on social media so others could appreciate the scenery.

Gợi ý: Good choice and relevant reasons, but correct repetition and grammar errors, and tighten structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words (e.g., “for example,” “because”). Avoid redundant phrases (“is a relax is so relaxing”). Use singular/plural and verb agreement (“which helps me”).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the lush greenery and wide open spaces. For example, walking through rice fields after a busy workday helps me unwind and clears my mind.

Gợi ý: Answer is relevant but incomplete and repetitive. Remove hesitation sounds (“Umm”), complete sentences, and provide specific examples or reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (use articles and plural forms: “the Philippines has a lot to offer, including mountains, seas, and beaches”). Aim for one clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because the Philippines offers diverse scenery close to home. For instance, the country has dramatic mountains, clear sea coasts, and white-sand beaches, so I can enjoy many different landscapes without traveling abroad.

× For example, we have a trip last time in a beach, so I can now share it in my social media where others can also enjoy but the view too.

✓ For example, we had a trip to a beach last time, so I can now share it on my social media where others can also enjoy the view.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'last time'. Use past tense 'had' for a completed past event. Also use correct prepositions: 'to a beach' (direction) and 'on my social media' (platform). Remove 'but' which is incorrect here and replace with 'the' before 'view' for clarity.

× The natural landscape is a relax is so relaxing and it's easy on the eyes which help me relax after the busy day.

✓ The natural landscape is very relaxing and easy on the eyes, which helps me relax after a busy day.

The original has a repeated phrase 'is a relax is so relaxing' causing redundancy and incorrect noun use. Replace with adjective 'relaxing'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'which helps' refers to 'landscape' (singular), and use 'a busy day' rather than 'the busy day' unless a specific day is meant.

× Umm Philippines has lot to offer.

✓ Umm, the Philippines has a lot to offer.

Use the definite article 'the' with country name 'Philippines'. Also include the quantifier 'a' with 'lot' to form 'a lot'. A comma after 'Umm' improves fluency.

× Philippines has its mountains, its seas, beaches and.

✓ The Philippines has mountains, seas, and beaches.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'Philippines' and remove redundant possessive 'its' to avoid repetition. Finish the list properly: 'mountains, seas, and beaches.' Remove the trailing 'and.'