Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors, use linking/detail briefly. Improve pronunciation and grammar (e.g., use plural/singular correctly and articles). Add one specific example of what you like to photograph.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different landscapes, especially mountain ranges and scenic lookout points. For example, last year I took photos of a nearby mountain sunrise, capturing the changing colours and cloud patterns.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with 1–2 supporting reasons using linking words. Remove fillers and repetition; correct grammar (use 'their' vs 'there', 'environment is green' etc.). Be specific about what you like in rural areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers peaceful, green scenery and interesting natural details. For instance, I like photographing rolling fields, traditional farms and streams, which show the area's colours and textures.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give specific reasons with correct grammar and fewer repetitions. Use linking words (for example, because, such as) and give one concrete example (a temple or historical site).

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it has many peaceful, green areas and historic sites. For example, I often photograph ancient temples and old town streets, which reflect local culture and are visually appealing.

× Yes, I like, yes I like take a different pictures and different views of mountains and beautiful place.

✓ Yes, I like taking different pictures and views of mountains and beautiful places.

The verb 'like' is normally followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) when describing hobbies or preferences (like taking). Also 'a different pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and make 'places' plural to match context. Suggestion: use 'like taking' and plural nouns where appropriate.

× I prefer to take a buzz in uh, uh, sorry, rural, uh, rural area because, uh, they are, they are.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are...

The original repeats filler words and uses 'take a buzz' which is unclear; likely intended 'be' or 'visit'. 'They are' refers to 'rural areas' so restate clearly. Suggestion: say 'I prefer rural areas because they are...' and avoid fillers.

× Their scenery is very beautiful and they're environment is greenery.

✓ The scenery is very beautiful and the environment is green.

Confusion between 'their' (possessive plural) and 'they're' (contraction of 'they are'). Use 'the scenery' or 'their scenery' consistently; better: 'The scenery is very beautiful'. 'Greenery' is a noun meaning 'plants'; to describe environment use adjective 'green' or 'green and peaceful'. Suggestion: use 'the environment is green' or 'there is a lot of greenery'.

× So I love to take, uh, pictures on the rural area.

✓ So I love to take pictures in rural areas.

Use preposition 'in' for being within an area, not 'on the' rural area. Also use plural 'rural areas' to match general preference. Suggestion: 'take pictures in rural areas'.

× I prefer to take out views in my own country because my own country is a landlocked country where there is a greenery in greenery environment and peaceful environment that is a lot of temples and historical place.

✓ I prefer to take photos of views in my own country because it is landlocked, has a green, peaceful environment, and has many temples and historical places.

Use 'take photos of' or 'take pictures of' rather than 'take out views'. 'There is a greenery in greenery environment' is ungrammatical; use 'has a green, peaceful environment' or 'there is a lot of greenery'. 'That is a lot of temples' should be 'and has many temples'. Use plural 'places'. Suggestion: restructure sentence for clarity and correct noun/adjective forms.

× So I want I want to take a photo in my own country.

✓ So I want to take photos in my own country.

The phrase duplicates 'I want'. Remove the repeated words and use plural 'photos' to match earlier mention of taking pictures of various views. Suggestion: say 'I want to take photos in my own country.'